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Do you think it’s important for us to learn about history

Do you think it’s important for us to learn about history E7MOQ
History is one of the most important things about human beings. It shows you where you are from, who you are. Though nowadays this subject is going to be a learn-by-heart one, students find it boring when their teacher tells them about what our ancestors have done. From my point of view, I agree with this thinking. First, studying history can widen your knowledge of the world. Every historical event has been recorded such as: World War I, World War II. Furthermore you will know how past societies, governments and cultures were built, and how they have changed. It will paint a picture of our modern life now.
History is one of the most
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important
things about human beings. It
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shows
you where you are from, who you are. Though nowadays this subject is going to be a learn-by-heart one, students find it boring when their teacher
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
tells
them about what our ancestors have done. From my point of view, I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
agree
with this thinking.

First
, studying history can widen your knowledge of the world. Every historical
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event
has
been recorded
such as: World War I, World War II.
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Furthermore
you will know how past societies,
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governments
and cultures
were built
, and how they have
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changed
. It will paint a picture of our modern life
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now
.
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IELTS letter Do you think it’s important for us to learn about history

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  American English
2 paragraphs
108 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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