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Write about a trip or a vacation you have taken or you want to take.

Write about a trip or a vacation you have taken or you want to take. GLbj2
Surely, indivial in our universe always or at least one time in whole life want to have a vacation or a trip and so am I. After long tired days, I just want to take a long rest to reborn myself, regenerate my inspiration. I want to take a trip to Da Lat, trip length about 3 or 5 days and I will go to there by my motorcycle. One of the reasons that I want to take a trip by motorcycle is I can stop at everywhere I want and I can take some pictures during going to Da Lat. Da Lat have many stunning spectaculars such as: pass road; the view of both sides; pine forest; waterfall…and so on. It is must be greatest if I can ride my motobike around Da Lat to enjoy charming view. One more thing is the weather of Da Lat is bestest suit on me. I into the weather which is a little cool, the wind blows my hair and I can wear a hoodie while I am lying in the chesterfield, drink a cup of cappuccino. The natural of Da Lat is very nice like a mystical world is needed discover. Da Lat have many kind of flowers, trees, vegetable, fruit that another place does not has such as: hydrangea; strawbery, lavender, black tomato; fennel…and so on. If I travel to Da Lat, I will go to chill in garden, farm to take some beautiful pictures and eat many kind of fruit, vegetable. There are have many flower fields, we can pay for an hour or more to go into this field. I want to go to night market in Da Lat, it will be fun. I can walk on the street lit by hundreds of light bulbs, enjoy some foods and talking to my friends. How peaceful it is. Night market buy many things like: clothes; foods; souvenir…anything that they can buy. Night market in Da Lat is extremely bustle by buyers and sellers. When you stop at anystall, the seller will receive you with the most sincerely. After at all, I will go to hotel to sleep and tomorrow I will wake up early in the morning to look the sunrise. The sun hides behind the mountains and drifts away when the time is right, I like this view and I can look it all the morning without boring. Da Lat is the most beautiful, charming, eye-catching to me. I love everything in Da Lat, from the weather, pass road to the sun, the view and food. If you are bored about your life, you can take a trip to Da Lat. It may help you regenerate my inspiration, reduce your stress. For me, Da Lat is something can not describe enough by words, it is something wonderful and the place that I can feel peaceful.
Surely
,
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indivial
in our universe always or at least one time in whole life
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want
to have a vacation or a
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trip
and
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so
am I. After long tired days, I
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just
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want
to take a long rest to reborn myself, regenerate my inspiration. I
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want
to take a
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trip
to
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Da
Lat,
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trip
length about 3 or 5 days and I will
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go to there
by my motorcycle.

One of the reasons that I
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want
to take a
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trip
by motorcycle is I can
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stop
at everywhere I
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want
and I can take
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some
pictures during going to
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Da
Lat.
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Da
Lat have
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many
stunning spectaculars such as: pass road; the
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view
of both sides; pine forest; waterfall…and
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so
on. It is
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must
be greatest if I can ride my
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motobike
around
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Da
Lat to enjoy charming
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view
. One more thing is the weather of
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Da
Lat is
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bestest
suit on me. I into the weather which is a
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little
cool, the wind blows my hair and I can wear a hoodie while I am lying in the chesterfield, drink a cup of cappuccino.

The natural of
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Da
Lat is
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very
nice like a mystical world
is needed
discover.
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Da
Lat have
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many kind
of flowers, trees, vegetable, fruit that another place does not
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has
such as: hydrangea;
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strawbery
, lavender, black tomato; fennel…and
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so
on. If I travel to
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Da
Lat, I will go to chill in garden, farm to take
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some
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beautiful
pictures and eat
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many kind
of fruit, vegetable. There are
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have
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many
flower fields, we can pay for an hour or more to go into this field.

I
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want
to go to night market in
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Da
Lat, it will be fun. I can walk on the street lit by hundreds of light bulbs, enjoy
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some
foods and talking to my friends. How peaceful it is. Night market
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buy
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many
things like: clothes; foods; souvenir…anything that they can
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buy
. Night market in
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Da
Lat is
extremely
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bustle
by buyers and sellers. When you
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stop
at
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anystall
, the seller will receive you with the most
sincerely
. After at all, I will go to hotel to sleep and tomorrow I will wake up early in the morning to look the sunrise. The sun
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hides
behind the mountains and drifts away when the time is right, I like this
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view
and I can look it all the morning without boring.

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Da
Lat is the most
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beautiful
, charming, eye-catching to me. I
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love
everything in
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Da
Lat, from the weather, pass road to the sun, the
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view
and food. If you
are bored
about your life, you can take a
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trip
to
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Da
Lat. It may
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help
you regenerate my inspiration,
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reduce
your
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stress
. For me,
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Da
Lat is something can not
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describe
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enough
by words, it is something wonderful and the place that I can feel peaceful.
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IELTS letter Write about a trip or a vacation you have taken or you want to take.

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477 words
5.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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