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You are organising a charity event at work to raise money for the local hospital. Write a letter to a local company. In your letter: Explain the event and where it will be held Ask if they would be interested in sponsoring the event Invite them to attend the event

You are organising a charity event at work to raise money for the local hospital. Write a letter to a local company. In your letter: Explain the event and where it will be held Ask if they would be interested in sponsoring the event Invite them to attend the event obeYK
Dear Mr Hoang I am writing to request the pleasure of your company at the event of Rose Charity Group, which raises money for the Hoang Hon Hospital on Friday 14th September. The anniversary will be held at the Children culture’s palace at 36 Ly Thai To Street, Hoan Kiem District. It’s next to the ATM of Saigonbank and will commence at 7 p. m by a ticket reception. As you know, most patient of the hospital are big fans of rock, so during a dinner, there will be a live band playing until the party finishes at 10 p. m At this time, with the situation of the Covid-19 pandemic, not only is Hoang Hon Hospital lacking beds because of the overwhelming number of patients, but they are also lacking in oxygen ventilators, which help for their rehabilitation of these people. That is the reason why we want to hold this event. Moreover, this anniversary will be played on the TV Program and It will broaden your reputation if there is an appearance of Thang Long Company, which is occupied by you, as the main sponsor. Could you please return the feedback on Thursday September 3rd to confirm your attendance? Once again, I really hope that you will be able to come to the event. Best wishes, Minh.
Dear Mr
Hoang


I am writing to request the pleasure of your
company
at the
event
of Rose Charity Group, which raises money for the
Hoang
Hon Hospital on Friday 14th September.

The anniversary will
be held
at the Children culture’s palace at 36
Ly
Thai To Street,
Hoan
Kiem
District. It’s
next
to the ATM of
Saigonbank
and will commence at 7 p. m by a ticket reception. As you know, most patient of the hospital are
big
fans of rock,
so
during a dinner, there will be a
live
band playing until the party finishes at 10 p.
m


At this time, with the situation of the Covid-19 pandemic, not
only
is
Hoang
Hon Hospital lacking beds
because
of the overwhelming number of patients,
but
they are
also
lacking in oxygen ventilators, which
help
for their rehabilitation of these
people
.
That is
the reason why we want to hold this
event
.
Moreover
, this anniversary will
be played
on the TV Program and It will broaden your reputation if there is an appearance of
Thang
Long
Company
, which
is occupied
by you, as the main sponsor.

Could you
please
return the feedback on
Thursday
September 3rd to confirm your attendance? Once again, I
really
hope that you will be able to
come
to the
event
.

Best wishes,

Minh
.
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IELTS letter You are organising a charity event at work to raise money for the local hospital. Write a letter to a local company. In your letter: Explain the event and where it will be held Ask if they would be interested in sponsoring the event Invite them to attend the event

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