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Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to your family party. In your letter – Explain why you are organizing the party. – Describe what you are planning to do. – Say how important it is to have your friend at the party.

Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to your family party. In your letter – Explain why you are organizing the party. – Describe what you are planning to do. – Say how important it is to have your friend at the party. lAxK
Dear Maninder, I hope you and your family are doing well. It’s my sister’s birthday in the upcoming weekend that is Saturday and we’re throwing a party for our nears and dears. You should definitely come! The party is going to be at the Roadside café in Panchkula, where we used to spend a lot of quality time together. I’m sure you know the way to the café very well, but in case you find yourself unfamiliar with the route, you can simply text or call me, and I’ll send you directions to the venue. The party will be quite fun; there will be plenty of dishes to eat, games with some background live band music, and also I’ll be bringing a special cake for my sister. You and I’ve been friends for a long, and you know how much my sister respects you. She will be surprised with joy if you come. Also, I know we haven’t seen each other for quite a few years, since you left town for some higher degree course. I hope you’re doing well there, and I would love to hear all about it at the party. Hope to see you very soon. Yours lovingly, Shivanshu Sharma
Dear
Maninder
,

I hope you and your family are doing well. It’s my sister’s birthday in the upcoming weekend
that is
Saturday and
we’re throwing a party for our nears and dears. You should definitely
come
!

The party is going to be at the Roadside café in
Panchkula
, where we
used
to spend
a lot of
quality time together. I’m sure you know the way to the café
very
well,
but
in case you find yourself unfamiliar with the route, you can
simply
text or call me, and I’ll
send
you directions to the venue. The party will be quite fun; there will be
plenty
of dishes to eat, games with
some
background
live
band music, and
also
I’ll be bringing a special cake for my sister.

You and I’ve been friends for a long, and you know how much my sister respects you. She will
be surprised
with joy if you
come
.
Also
, I know we haven’t
seen
each other for quite a few years, since you
left
town for
some
higher degree course. I hope you’re doing well there, and I would
love
to hear all about it at the party.

Hope to
see
you
very
soon
.

Yours
lovingly
,

Shivanshu
Sharma
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IELTS letter Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to your family party. In your letter – Explain why you are organizing the party. – Describe what you are planning to do. – Say how important it is to have your friend at the party.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
202 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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