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Write a letter to the hospital.

Write a letter to the hospital. QXn3

Since childhood, I am passionate about helping others. I used to help everyone around me. I feel for others which motivates me to do something better for them. As I grew up, I realized helping anyone gives me joy and pleasure. As I studied nursing during my graduation. so, I know the basics of medication very well. I can treat people with wounds and take care of them. Apart from treatment, I am able to talk with patients and console them. I am a working professional because of which I have commitments towards my company. I am easily reachable at weekends over a single call. Also, if required sometimes I can be available on-demand as well in case of emergencies.

Since childhood, I am passionate about helping others. I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 everyone around me. I feel for others which motivates me to do something better for them. As I grew up, I realized helping anyone gives me joy and pleasure.

“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
 I studied nursing during my graduation. This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSo
so
, I know the basics of medication This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 well. I can treat This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 with wounds and take care of them. Apart from treatment, I am able to talk with patients and console them.

I am a working professional This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of which I have commitments towards my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
. I am easily
 reachable at weekends over a single call. Also
, if required This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :in some instances
sometimes
 I can be available on-demand as well
 in case of emergencies. 