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Write a letter to park authority about tha damage made to the park

Write a letter to park authority about tha damage made to the park 5RYe
Dear Sir, I am Smith John- resident of palava city from last 5 years and this letter is regard to express my great disappointed about the damage in park. Me and family moved here because of it's proximity and affordability. There are several park in the vicinity of our society, Black rose park is one of them. My son and his friends play in this park and people spending quality time in this park. Unfortunately, this park is total pollution and seating arrangment is totally distructed. There are very limited plants in the park and most if them are died. There is construction activity which is on going near to the park and I believe this is the result of that activity. As you have the park maintenance responsibility you should take the initialtive to clear this sabotage and make park again live. You may understand the importance of this park for the residents and the kids. Hence, requested you please stop construction. This construction is illegal and it's not beneficial to anyone. Immediate action is altterly important. Please consider this complaine as urgent matter otherwise we have to seek the police help which is definitely you won't want. Yours Sincerely,
Dear Sir,

I am Smith John- resident of
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palava
city from last 5 years and this letter is regard to express my great disappointed about the damage in
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park
.
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Me
and family
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moved
here
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because
Did you mean "of its proximity"?
of it's proximity
and affordability. There are several
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park
in the vicinity of our society, Black rose
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park
is one of them. My son and his friends play in this
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park
and
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people
spending quality time in this park.

Unfortunately, this
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park
is total pollution and seating
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arrangment
is
totally
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distructed
. There are
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very
limited plants in the
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park
and most if them are
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died
. There is construction activity which is on going near to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
and I believe this is the result of that activity. As you have the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
park
maintenance responsibility you should take the
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initialtive
to
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clear
this sabotage and
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make
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park
again
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live
. You may understand the importance of this
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park
for the residents and the kids.
Hence
, requested you
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please
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stop
construction.

This construction is illegal and it's not beneficial to anyone. Immediate action is
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altterly
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important
.
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Please
consider this
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complaine
as urgent matter
otherwise
we
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have to
seek the police
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help
which is definitely you won't want.

Yours
Sincerely
,
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IELTS letter Write a letter to park authority about tha damage made to the park

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5 paragraphs
201 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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