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You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Thank your friend for the holiday • Explain that you left your wallet in their house • Give them instruction of how to send it back to you

You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Thank your friend for the holiday • Explain that you left your wallet in their house • Give them instruction of how to send it back to you NR60
Dear jubayer, I hope this letter will find you well. I’m writing to thank you for the holiday. It’s very kind of you but unfortunately, I had missed my wallet in your sweet home. Let me explain my situation in more detail. When I arrived home then I realized that I had forgotten my wallet at your house. As you had been noticing I was so hurrying to catch up on my flight, for that reason I didn’t check my back pocket properly, I have a credit card in my wallet. So, currently, I’m not able to clear my home loan without my card. Could you please help to send it back to me? It would be very helpful for me. You can use my office address for sending my money bag to me and please make sure you have our office contact details. Please let me know. Your friend Mehidi
Dear
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jubayer
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I hope this letter will find you well. I’m writing to thank you for the holiday. It’s
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very
kind of you
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but
unfortunately, I had missed my wallet in your sweet home.

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Let
me
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explain
my situation in more detail.
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When
I arrived home then I realized that I had forgotten my wallet at your
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house
. As you had been noticing I was
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so
hurrying to catch up on my flight, for that reason I didn’t
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check
my back pocket
properly
, I have a credit card in my wallet.
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So
,
currently
, I’m not able to
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clear
my home loan without my card.

Could you
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please
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help
to
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send
it back to me? It would be
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very
helpful for me. You can
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use
my office address for sending my money bag to me and
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please
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make
sure you have our office contact
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details
.

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Please
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let
me know.

Your friend

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Mehidi

IELTS letter You have just spent a week with a friend on holiday. When you got home, you realized you had left your wallet there. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Thank your friend for the holiday • Explain that you left your wallet in their house • Give them instruction of how to send it back to you

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  American English
6 paragraphs
150 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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