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You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

Dear Cherry, Hey how are you? It's been so long we hang out together. Firstly I will apologize you for replying after couple of weeks. I told you in my previous letter about my new project, the deadline for the project was changed and we have to submit our work one week before the due date I was extremely busy with my work. My dear friend you asked for an advice about whether you should go to college or search for a job. In my opinion I would suggest you to find a job rather going to college because now a days the tuition fees are increasing day by day and to pay the amount you have to earn. What do I believe that you will not enjoy going to college because I know the financial condition of your family paying a huge amount would be difficult for instance your father will pay the fee you will always feel yourself out of the box because everyone there belongs to upper class family and we middle class people cannot match their standards. Job will help you in couple of first you will to know the value of money additionally you will become more responsible, Independent and your personality will enhance automatically. You will also be able to pay your expense and help your father. We both are childhood friends I know you achieve good grades in your matriculation and intermediate exams. Being an employee will not be difficult for you. You can get an opportunity as a receptionist in a company or you can be or telephone operator too. I am aware about your love for kids becaming a babysitter is a perfect source of earning for you. I hope my advice will help you to make your decision let me know what you decide. Yours sincerely, Ramsha
Dear Cherry, Hey how are you? It's been
so
long we hang out together.
Firstly
I will apologize you for replying after couple of weeks. I
told
you in my previous letter about my new project, the deadline for the project was
changed
and we
have to
submit our work one week
before
the due date I was
extremely
busy with my work. My dear friend you
asked for
an advice about whether you should go to college or search for a job. In my opinion I would suggest you to find a job
rather
going to college
because
now
a days the tuition fees are increasing day by day and to pay the amount you
have to
earn. What do I believe that you will not enjoy going to college
because
I
know
the financial condition of your family paying a huge amount would be difficult
for instance
your father will pay the fee you will always feel yourself out of the box
because
everyone there belongs to upper
class
family and we middle
class
people
cannot match their standards. Job will
help
you in couple of
first
you will to
know
the value of money
additionally
you will become more responsible, Independent and your personality will enhance
automatically
. You will
also
be able to pay your expense and
help
your father. We both are childhood friends I
know
you achieve
good
grades in your matriculation and intermediate exams. Being an employee will not be difficult for you. You can
get
an opportunity as a receptionist in a
company
or you can be or telephone operator too. I am aware about your
love
for kids becaming a babysitter is a perfect source of earning for you. I hope my advice will
help
you to
make
your decision
let
me
know
what you decide.

Yours
sincerely
, Ramsha
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IELTS letter You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter: say why he/she would not enjoy going to college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

Letter
  American English
2 paragraphs
306 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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