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Your company sent you to USA for further training. You stayed for the decided time but you want to stay there for more time. Write a letter to the company manager. In your letter - What you have done during the training period. - What benefits you have received from training - Why you want to overstay there.

Your company sent you to USA for further training. You stayed for the decided time but you want to stay there for more time. Write a letter to the company manager. In your letter - What you have done during the training period. - What benefits you have received from training - Why you want to overstay there. r88e2
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to inform you that my training is about to finish next week. However, I intend to stay more time for new project organizing by trainer. Allow me to elaborate. I would like to thank you for providing me the opportunity. Here, the training program helped to develop my skills and enhance my knowledge regarding Accounts Payable, General ledger. My trainer have been quite impressed by my performance. Therefore, he had approached me for new project which would be useful for me to hone up my skills. Additionally, I would be able to perform tasks more efficiently. My certification exam is already cleared and passed with highest scores. As you know that my flight ticket had booked. But I need to make request if it is possible I would love to stay here for one more month. Resultancy, I can easily guide our team members in all accounting skills. Looking forward for you approval for the same. Yours's faithfullyJanice
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to inform you that my training is about to finish
next
week.
However
, I intend to stay more time for new project organizing by trainer.
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
Allow
me to elaborate. I would like to thank you for providing me the opportunity. Here, the training program
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
helped
to develop my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
and enhance my knowledge regarding Accounts Payable, General ledger. My trainer have been quite impressed by my performance.
Therefore
, he had approached me for new project which would be useful for me to hone up my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
.
Additionally
, I would be able to perform tasks more
efficiently
. My certification exam is already cleared and passed with
A determiner is probably missing here: "the highest".
highest
scores.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
you know that my flight ticket had booked.
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
But
I need to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
request if it is possible I would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
to stay here for one more month.
Possible spelling mistake found.
Resultancy
, I can
easily
guide our team members in all accounting
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
. Looking forward for you approval for the same.
An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: "Yours"?
Yours'
s
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph
faithfullyJanice
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IELTS letter Your company sent you to USA for further training. You stayed for the decided time but you want to stay there for more time. Write a letter to the company manager. In your letter - What you have done during the training period. - What benefits you have received from training - Why you want to overstay there.

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  American English
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164 words
5.5
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