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You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/ she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter - say why he/ she would not enjoy going to a college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/ her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/ her

You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/ she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter - say why he/ she would not enjoy going to a college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/ her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/ her Reoo
Dear Nick, I’m glad to receive your letter. I hope you and family are doing great. I read you’ve to make an important decision by choosing between studing or getting a job, where I would suggest you to choose the former one. I have known you for years now. You’re the one who might not be interested in scrambling through the books but like getting a real life lesson from the practical world. The thrill and challenges you always look for, are gained more from the job you work for and not by going to college. You also told me that recently you are going through financial strain. Getting a job would solve this problem for you and you can also save money in case you decide to do part-time learning in future. The skills you have at cooking can lend you good work as chef at any restaurant. You can also try getting a position of kitchen supervisor considering your previous experience. Hope this piece of advice may help you. Give my love and regards to family. Your friend Robin
Dear Nick,

I’m glad to receive your letter. I hope you and family are doing great.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
read you’ve to
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make
an
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important
decision by choosing between
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studing
or getting a job, where I would suggest you to choose the former one.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have known you for years
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
now
. You’re the one who might not
be interested
in scrambling through the books
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
but
like getting a real life lesson from the practical world. The thrill and challenges you always look for,
are gained
more from the job you work for and not by going to college.

You
also
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
told
me that recently you are going through financial strain. Getting a job would solve this problem for you and you can
also
save money in case you decide to do part-time learning
Did you mean: "in the future"?
in future
.

The
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
skills
you have at cooking can lend you
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
good
work as chef at any restaurant. You can
also
try getting a position of kitchen supervisor considering your previous experience.

Hope this piece of advice may
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you. Give my
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
love
and regards to family.

Your friend

Robin
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IELTS letter You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/ she should get a job. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter - say why he/ she would not enjoy going to a college explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/ her suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/ her

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
180 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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