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Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter • Describe the problem with the equipment • Explain how this problem is affecting your work • Say what you want the shop or company to do

Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter • Describe the problem with the equipment • Explain how this problem is affecting your work • Say what you want the shop or company to do 7bYY
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to a complaint about an equipment that was purchased from your company last week. The product was a keyboard and a mouse, which was a dell brand and the total cost was $1500. Some keys on the keyboard are not working and I think there would be a malfunction in the equipment. I work as a type writer in a company and I have daily targets to finish every day. This problem has not allowed me to finish my work on time and I have huge size of work pending in my office. The mouse also has some problems with the buttons, which has made my work paralyzed. I would be grateful if the company can issue me new materials in a couple of days, which would help me to finish my work by the end of the week. I would appreciate if you could look into this matter at the earliest and do the need as soon as possible. Yours Faithfully, Mack
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter with regard to a complaint about
an equipment
that was
purchased
from your
company
last week. The product was a keyboard and a mouse, which was a dell brand and the total cost was $1500.

Some
keys on the keyboard are not working and I
think
there would be a malfunction in the equipment. I
work
as a type writer in a
company
and I have daily targets to finish every day. This problem has not
allowed
me to finish my
work
on time and I have huge size of
work
pending in my office. The mouse
also
has
some
problems with the buttons, which has made my
work
paralyzed.

I would be grateful if the
company
can issue me new materials in a couple of days, which would
help
me to finish my
work
by the
end
of the week. I would appreciate if you could look into this matter at the earliest and do the need as
soon
as possible.

Yours
Faithfully
,

Mack
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IELTS letter Write a letter to the shop or company which supplied the equipment in your letter • Describe the problem with the equipment • Explain how this problem is affecting your work • Say what you want the shop or company to do

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
173 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    One main idea per paragraph
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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