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You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, you should tell:  Explain how you knew about the plans  Describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighborhood  Suggest a possible solution to the problem.

You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, you should tell:  Explain how you knew about the plans  Describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighborhood  Suggest a possible solution to the problem. KmJw
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to express my disappointment towards the construction of an airport in my locality. From a local newspaper I came to know about this. I am completely disfavour this project, since an airport is already available within the range if 10km. I personally believe, new airport would have detrimental effects on community as well as environment. Firstly, for such a huge project plentiful land is required. Consequently, it will end up with deforestation. Secondly, planes results noise pollution. This will soar many heath problems, for instance hearing issues and sleeping disorder. In order to cure these potential issues, government should invest such funds in former airport. This would serve both purposes, efficient service and sustainable development. I am sure you will take care of these issues and my suggestions would be worthy in regards to this project. Sincerely, Vikas Kanda
Dear sir,

I am writing this letter to express my disappointment towards the construction of an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
airport
in my locality. From a local newspaper I came to know about this. I am completely
Consider using a past participle here: "disfavoured".
disfavour
this project, since an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
airport
is already available within the range if
Insert a space between the numerical value and the unit symbol "10 km"
10km
.

I
personally
believe, new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
airport
would have detrimental effects on community
as well
as environment.
Firstly
, for such a huge project plentiful land
is required
.
Consequently
, it will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
end
up with deforestation.
Secondly
,
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
planes
results noise pollution. This will soar
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
many
heath problems,
for instance
hearing issues and sleeping disorder.

In order to cure these potential issues,
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
government
should invest such funds in former
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
airport
. This would serve both purposes, efficient service and sustainable development.

I am sure you will take care of these issues and my suggestions would be worthy
Use "in regard to", "with regard to", or more simply "regarding".
in regards to
this project.

Sincerely
,

Vikas
Possible spelling mistake found.
Kanda

IELTS letter You recently discovered that there are plans to construct an airport in your locality. Write a letter to the local authority. In your letter, you should tell:  Explain how you knew about the plans  Describe the negative effect of the construction on your neighborhood  Suggest a possible solution to the problem.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
145 words
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