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You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take

You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take 1q9M

Dear Ms. Emma, I hope you are doing well! My name is Musti who is currently a student of your dance academy batch number A. Anyway, the reason I am writing is to let you know that I will not be able to continue this dance course anymore. Firstly, as you know I have been doing this job and part-time for a few months and it takes a toll on me. Secondly, the company where I am working; they have given me a new position and role and thus it increased my work too. I will no longer be able to continue doing a dance class with you and it's not something that I would like to quit but due to a hectic schedule, I cannot continue doing this. Thus, based on this situation, I would really appreciate it if you could allow me to send a class video online. Yours Sincerely, Musti

Dear Ms. Emma,

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doing
 well! My name is Possible spelling mistake found.MustMultiMuftiMustyMustnMusts
Musti
 who is currently
 a student of your dance academy batch number A. Anyway, the reason I am writing is to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
let
 you know that I will not be able to continue this dance course anymore.

Firstly
, as you know I have been You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccomplishmentthingactactionperformancedeed
doing
 this job and part-time for a few months and it takes a toll on me. Secondly
, the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 where I am working; they have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 me a new position and role and thus
 it increased my work too.

I will no longer be able to continue You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccomplishmentthingactactionperformancedeed
doing
 a dance This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 with you and it's not something that I would like to quit This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 due to a hectic schedule, I cannot continue You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaccomplishmentthingactactionperformancedeed
doing
 this.

Thus
, based on this situation, I would really
 appreciate it if you could This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :transmit
send
 a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :coursetraining
class
 video online.

Yours Sincerely
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Musti