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You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job.You think he/she should get a iob. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter . say why he/she would not enioy going to college I . explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her . suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a iob. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter. say why he/she would not enioy going to college I. explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her. suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her 7DgA
Hello Hetin, After a prolong time, I am happy to heard about you and admit your health is good. I am writing this letter to give you guidance about your concern between choosing job or continue academy studies. I am very glad that you need assistance from me for your future prospects due to your concern I cannot denied the fact that you should start working instead of further studies. Furthermore, as we are a very close through school days and I am too much cognizant about your low attendance in school due to lack interest in sitting and study for long time. College is more similar and having a long day of lectures so you will have to face similar condition and you will not relish. Secondly you have a very minuscule learning interest and your grasping capabilities are weak as compare to college pupils so it is better to go for occupation instead of university educations. Lastly, I would recommend you need to apply in some call center organization, or for some office administration assistance because you have good knowledge on your English and communication skills which will give you an advantage. Warm wishes, Jaiwick soni
Hello
Hetin
,

After
a prolong
time, I am happy to heard about you and admit your health is
good
. I am writing this letter to give you guidance about your concern between choosing job or continue academy studies.

I am
very
glad that you need assistance from me for your future prospects due to your concern I cannot
denied
the fact that you should
start
working
instead
of
further
studies.
Furthermore
, as we are a
very
close through school
days and
I am too much cognizant about your low attendance in school due to lack interest in sitting and study for long time. College is more similar and having a long day of lectures
so
you will
have to
face similar condition and you will not relish.

Secondly
you have a
very
minuscule learning interest and your grasping capabilities are weak as compare to college pupils
so
it is better to go for occupation
instead
of university educations.

Lastly
, I would recommend you need to apply in
some
call
center organization, or for
some
office administration assistance
because
you have
good
knowledge on your English and communication
skills
which will give you an advantage.

Warm wishes,

Jaiwick
soni
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IELTS letter You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a iob. Write a letter to this friend. In your letter. say why he/she would not enioy going to college I. explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her. suggest types of job that would be suitable for him/her

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