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You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him/her in the hospital, telling him/her about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him/her which team won say how you felt about the match ask how he/she is doing

You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him/her in the hospital, telling him/her about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him/her which team won say how you felt about the match ask how he/she is doing LJRr
Dear Harry, I have heard news of your injury while playing badminton last week. I felt disheartened after hearing it because we were both supposed to play this match as a team. I hope your wounds are good and I wish your fast recovery. As I got news on the day of competition earlier I decided to turnout from the match, later on our coach informed me that substitute is available and he is a good player, therefore, I participated in it. Here is a great news that our team won the tournament by 3 points. Your presence were being missed during the whole match. All the members talked about you as we had promised them to win trophy this year. Our team beat them by 21-1, 21-15. I had never played with new player before so this match was little difficult due to incordination. The match was nerve-racking because opponents were hotshot players. I had lost hopes of winning before the final round, however, we performed well under the pressure and won it with big blow. Nevertheless, I am aiming to play next cup tie with you. See you soon once you get discharged. Yours sincerely, John
Dear Harry, I have heard
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of your injury while playing badminton last week. I felt disheartened after hearing it
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because
we were both supposed to play this
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match
as a team. I hope your wounds are
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good
and I wish your
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fast
recovery. As I
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got
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news
on the day of competition earlier I decided to turnout from the
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match
, later on our coach informed me that substitute is
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available and
he is a
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good
player,
therefore
, I participated in it. Here is a great
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news
that our team won the tournament by 3 points. Your presence were
being missed
during the whole
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match
. All the members talked about you as we had promised them to win trophy this year. Our team beat them by 21-1, 21-15. I had never played with
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new
player
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before
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so
this
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match
was
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little
difficult due to
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incordination
. The
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match
was nerve-racking
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because
opponents were hotshot players. I had lost hopes of winning
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before
the final round,
however
, we performed well under the pressure and won it with
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big
blow.
Nevertheless
, I am aiming to play
next
cup tie with you.
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See
you
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soon
once you
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get
discharged. Yours
sincerely
,
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John

IELTS letter You play a team sport with some friends. Last week a member of the team had an accident and wasn't able to play with you at the weekend. You decide to write to him/her in the hospital, telling him/her about the match. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, tell him/her which team won say how you felt about the match ask how he/she is doing

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