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you have recently left something in a train, write a letterto the manager of the lost and found departement nad specify-when you lost it ?

you have recently left something in a train, write a letterto the manager of the lost and found departement nad specify-when you lost it? mYM8
Dear sir or madam, My name is Navdeep kaur, from Moga and I am writing this letter to report about something that I lost on the train. I recently travelled from Delhi to Mumbai on Shatabadi Express. But when I returned home I discovered that I had left my black leather laptop cover in the train. It is rectangular bag of Dell company. Actually, I was working on my laptop in the train I had my suitcase also with me. I picked my suitcase and laptop, but forgot its bag in the train.
Dear sir or madam, My name is
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Navdeep
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kaur
, from
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Moga and
I am writing this letter to report about something that I lost on the
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train
. I recently travelled from Delhi to Mumbai on
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Shatabadi
Express.
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But
when I returned home I discovered that I had
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left
my black leather laptop cover in the
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train
. It is rectangular bag of Dell
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company
. Actually, I was working on my laptop in the
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train
I had my suitcase
also
with me. I picked my suitcase and laptop,
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but
forgot its bag in the
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train
.

IELTS letter you have recently left something in a train, write a letterto the manager of the lost and found departement nad specify-when you lost it?

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  American English
1 paragraphs
93 words
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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