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(2) you recently went on a holiday tour for a week. Your friend lent you a guide book. Write a letter to thank your friend. In your letter Tell your friend about the holiday Explain how the guidebook was helpful Tell him when and how will you return the guide book.

(2) you recently went on a holiday tour for a week. Your friend lent you a guide book. Write a letter to thank your friend. In your letter Tell your friend about the holiday Explain how the guidebook was helpful Tell him when and how will you return the guide book. nqpl
Dear Simon, Hope your examination went good and wish you’ll score better. I’m writing this to thanking you about the book which you lent me during my tour. The holiday destination was so good. I must say it worth my money. It consist of almost one month visit to Singapore and all I can say it was amazing experience to spent a time in this beautiful city. The book “minute to Singapore” was very helpful. All thanks to you my dear. It not only provide me the details of the places but also gave the information about how to reach to a particular place with a picture of map. Thus, it was quite important to me. In fact, it worked as a tour guide to me which saves my cost for hiring the guide man. Hey! Next week I’m planning to come there therefore, if it is fine with you I’ll return it by upcoming Tuesday. Or if you need it on the urgency basis let me know I’ll courier to you. Thanks again for providing me such a great partner during my trip. Lots of love, John.
Dear Simon,

Hope your examination went
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and wish you’ll score better. I’m writing this to thanking you about the book which you lent me during my tour.

The holiday destination was
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. I
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say it worth my money. It
Did you mean "consists"?
consist
of almost one month visit to Singapore and all I can say it was amazing experience
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to spent
a time in this
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beautiful
city. The book “minute to Singapore” was
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very
helpful. All thanks to you my dear. It not
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provide me the
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details
of the places
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also
gave the information about how to reach to a particular place with a picture of map.
Thus
, it was quite
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important
to me. In fact, it worked as a tour guide to me which saves my cost for hiring the guide
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.

Hey!
Next
week I’m planning to
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there
therefore
, if it is fine with you I’ll return it by upcoming Tuesday. Or if you need it on the urgency basis
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let
me know I’ll courier to you.

Thanks again for providing me such a great partner during my trip.

Lots of
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,

John.
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IELTS letter (2) you recently went on a holiday tour for a week. Your friend lent you a guide book. Write a letter to thank your friend. In your letter Tell your friend about the holiday Explain how the guidebook was helpful Tell him when and how will you return the guide book.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
188 words
6.0
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