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You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter: what the article is about what the error is what you expect the editor to do

You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter: what the article is about what the error is what you expect the editor to do xyJ6
Dear Sir or Madam, I like reading your newspaper as it is one of the most popular dailies in our country and offers truly remarkable news and information. I especially like to read your article section where you do a great job of writing about the life of a person who has contributed to our society at some point in his life one way or another. But, a couple of weeks ago, when I was reading about the life of such a person in your article section, published on April 17, 2019, I unexpectedly discovered some factual errors. In fact, the person, you wrote about, is a distant relative of mine, and I happen to know him for almost 20 years. And, I also know this for fact that he was never “relieved of his duty” due to some “misconduct” at his work, rather he simply decided to retire from his job because of suffering from a chronic illness almost 10 years ago. I hope that the mistake was not intentional. Therefore, I would really like to request you to please correct the blunder while also making sure at the same time that such a mistake doesn’t repeat in future. I hope to hear from you soon. Yours faithfully, Roger MacLaine
Dear Sir or Madam,

I like reading your newspaper as it is one of the most popular dailies in our country and offers
truly
remarkable news and information. I
especially
like to read your article section where you do a great job of writing about the life of a person who has contributed to our society at
some
point in his life one way or another.

But
, a couple of weeks ago, when I was reading about the life of such a person in your article section, published on April 17, 2019, I
unexpectedly
discovered
some
factual errors. In fact, the person, you wrote about, is a distant relative of mine, and I happen to know him for almost 20 years. And, I
also
know this for fact that he was never “relieved of his duty” due to
some
“misconduct” at his work,
rather
he
simply
decided to retire from his job
because
of suffering from a chronic illness almost 10 years ago. I hope that the mistake was not intentional.

Therefore
, I would
really
like to request you to
please
correct the blunder while
also
making sure at the same time that such a mistake doesn’t repeat
in future
.

I hope to hear from you
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Roger
MacLaine
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IELTS letter You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter: what the article is about what the error is what you expect the editor to do

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
210 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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