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You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter: what the article is about what the error is what you expect the editor to do

You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter: what the article is about what the error is what you expect the editor to do 6PPl
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to inform you that an article about my hometown which was recently published by you on Trip Advisor magazine contained some false information. I read the complete article thoroughly. Since you wrote regarding our culture and customs I found it quite interesting. I would like to express my gratitude for the same. However, the information related to the climate of our city was incorrect. You stated that the maximum temperature reaches up to 45 degree C, which is not true. In fact, our city does not get hotter than 28 degree C in summers. It is important to portray the true picture of a town in travel magazines as false information can adversely affect the tourism industry. Moreover, fake information can negatively affect the reputation of our hometown. I am humbly requesting you to correct the information and republish it in your future prints. In addition to this it would be great if you could add a footnote stating that the given information was false. I am looking forward to a quick resolution to this important matter. Yours faithfully Somantha
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing to inform you that an article about my hometown which was recently published by you on Trip Advisor magazine contained
some
false information.

I read the complete article
thoroughly
. Since you wrote regarding our culture and customs I found it quite interesting. I would like to express my gratitude for the same.
However
, the
information
related to the climate of our city was incorrect. You stated that the maximum temperature reaches up to 45 degree C, which is not true. In fact, our city does not
get
hotter than 28 degree C in summers. It is
important
to portray the true picture of a town in travel magazines as false
information
can
adversely
affect the tourism industry.
Moreover
, fake
information
can
negatively
affect the reputation of our hometown.

I am
humbly
requesting you to correct the
information
and republish it in your future prints.
In addition
to this it would be great if you could
add
a footnote stating that the
given
information
was false.

I am looking forward to a quick resolution to this
important
matter.

Yours
faithfully


Somantha
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IELTS letter You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter: what the article is about what the error is what you expect the editor to do

Letter
  American English
6 paragraphs
186 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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