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You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter: what the article is about what the error is what you expect the editor to do

You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter: what the article is about what the error is what you expect the editor to do VooK
Dear Sir/ Madam, I am writing to inform you about some incorrect information that you had mention in your article on 10th of April. At the first, I should thank you for your amazing article. No one can describe our town as you did. However, there is some mistake in your article. First of all, you said one hundred thousand of people currently live in my city, it is not correct. Right now population of my city is more than one million. Secondly, you said Mashhad's climate is most of the time is rainy is the winter, while I think it is just cold without rain or snow. Finally, as I read in your article I think founder of Sajad museum was Ali Saberi not Jahangir Froughi. I have plenty of information about my city that I am glad to share with you. For the beginning, there are some nice tourist villages around Mashhad with, like Torghabe, Shandiz. Tourists can buy their souvenirs from these places. Moreover, some famous falls like Torogh falls just 30 miles far ways from Mashhad. I think you should better write a new article and add new information about my city, and at meanwhile correct your mistakes. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Mari.
Dear Sir/ Madam,

I am writing to inform you about
some
incorrect information that you had mention in your
article
on 10th of April.

At the
first
, I should thank you for your amazing
article
. No one can
describe
our town as you did.
However
, there is
some
mistake in your
article
.
First of all
, you said one hundred thousand of
people
currently
live
in my city, it is not correct. Right
now
population of my city is more than one million.
Secondly
, you said Mashhad's climate is most of the time is rainy is the winter, while I
think
it is
just
cold
without rain or snow.
Finally
, as I read in your
article
I
think
founder of
Sajad
museum was Ali
Saberi
not Jahangir
Froughi
.

I have
plenty
of information about my city that I am glad to share with you. For the beginning, there are
some
nice tourist villages around Mashhad with, like
Torghabe
,
Shandiz
. Tourists can
buy
their souvenirs from these places.
Moreover
,
some
famous
falls like
Torogh
falls
just
30 miles
far ways from Mashhad.

I
think
you should better write a new
article
and
add
new information about my city, and at meanwhile correct your mistakes.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Mari.
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IELTS letter You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter: what the article is about what the error is what you expect the editor to do

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
212 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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