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you have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. you now find that you cannot continue the course. write a letter to your tutor. in your letter, - describe the situation, - explain why you cannot continue at this time, -say what action you woild like to take. write at least 150 words.

you have a full-time job and are also doing a part-time evening course. you now find that you cannot continue the course. write a letter to your tutor. in your letter, - describe the situation, - explain why you cannot continue at this time, -say what action you woild like to take. ryN2

Dear Mr Doe I am Sam Chan, one of the student in your evening course. I am writing to request for deferring the evening course. In a normal case, I used to be able to work my full-time job completely together with a part-time evening course. However, due to the epidemic, many companies need to lay off people in order to keep the company alive. My company is one of them. Many of my co-workers had been fired, consequently, my workload is being increased dramatically. I am afraid I will not have enough time to complete the course at this moment. As a result, I hope you will do me a favour that you permit me to defer my course for a least one semester, as I really have a great interest in your course. Hope my past record will be token into account when you are making the decision. I look forward to your reply soon. Yours sincerely Sam Chan

Dear Mr Doe

I am Sam Chan, one of the student in your evening You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
. I am writing to request for deferring the evening course.

In a normal case, I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 to be able to work my full-time job completely together with a part-time evening You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
. However
, due to the epidemic, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
many
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisescorporations
companies
 need to lay off This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 in order to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 alive. My This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 is one of them. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a plethora ofa number ofnumerous
Many
 of my co-workers had been fired
, consequently
, my workload is being increased
dramatically
. I am afraid I will not have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
 time to complete the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 at this moment.

As a result
, I hope you will do me a Possible spelling mistake. 'favour' is British English.favor
favour
 that you permit me to defer my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withdevelopmentseriessystemprogramplanway
course
 for Use "the" with the superlative.the
a
 least one semester, as I really
 have a great interest in your course.

Hope my past record will be token into account when you are making the decision. I look forward to your reply This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours sincerely


Sam Chan