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You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter: what the article is about what the error is what you expect the editor to do

You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter: what the article is about what the error is what you expect the editor to do xyyb

Dear Sir/ Madam, I regret to inform you that the information published in your magazine about our Bangalore city as great but some information was misleading to the readers. To begin with, the article which was published on the 22nd of January 2021 in the Incredible India section. I found the details about the place of interest to the tourist is less and more polluted area. I completely disagree with the info because our city is one of the finest green cities and it has much historical places, amusement parks to visit. The magazines play a vital role in spreading the correct information to the community when the incorrect details about the place that are shared to the public as a consequence, it creates negative impact about that location. I would be grateful if you could republish the same article with the updated false information so it really assists to attract more people to explore our city. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Somy

Dear Sir/ Madam,

I regret to inform you that the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstructionwordknowledgeintelligenceadvicematerial
information
 published in your magazine about our Bangalore city as great This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
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some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstructionwordknowledgeintelligenceadvicematerial
information
 was misleading to the readers.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, the article which was published
 on the 22nd of January 2021 in the Incredible India section. I found the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 about the place of interest to the tourist is less and more polluted area. I completely disagree with the info This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 our city is one of the finest green cities and it has much historical places, amusement parks to visit. The magazines play a vital role in spreading the correct You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstructionwordknowledgeintelligenceadvicematerial
information
 to the community when the incorrect This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 about the place that are shared
 to the public as a consequence, it creates This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:adverse
negative
 impact about that location.

I would be grateful if you could republish the same article with the updated false You use this word too often, consider replacing it withinstructionwordknowledgeintelligenceadvicematerial
information
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 it really
 assists to attract more This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 to explore our city.

I look forward to hearing from you This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
.

Yours faithfully
,

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