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You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter: what the article is about what the error is what you expect the editor to do

You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter: what the article is about what the error is what you expect the editor to do xyyb
Dear Sir/ Madam, I regret to inform you that the information published in your magazine about our Bangalore city as great but some information was misleading to the readers. To begin with, the article which was published on the 22nd of January 2021 in the Incredible India section. I found the details about the place of interest to the tourist is less and more polluted area. I completely disagree with the info because our city is one of the finest green cities and it has much historical places, amusement parks to visit. The magazines play a vital role in spreading the correct information to the community when the incorrect details about the place that are shared to the public as a consequence, it creates negative impact about that location. I would be grateful if you could republish the same article with the updated false information so it really assists to attract more people to explore our city. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours faithfully, Somy
Dear Sir/ Madam,

I regret to inform you that the
information
published in your magazine about our Bangalore city as great
but
some
information
was misleading to the readers.

To
begin
with, the article which
was published
on the 22nd of January 2021 in the Incredible India section. I found the
details
about the place of interest to the tourist is less and more polluted area. I completely disagree with the info
because
our city is one of the finest green cities and it has much historical places, amusement parks to visit. The magazines play a vital role in spreading the correct
information
to the community when the incorrect
details
about the place that
are shared
to the public as a consequence, it creates
negative
impact about that location.

I would be grateful if you could republish the same article with the updated false
information
so
it
really
assists to attract more
people
to explore our city.

I look forward to hearing from you
soon
.

Yours
faithfully
,

Somy
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IELTS letter You recently read an article in the newspaper about someone you know personally. You found some information is wrong. Write a letter to the editor to inform him about it. In your letter: what the article is about what the error is what you expect the editor to do

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
167 words
6.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 6.5
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