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A local school is requesting ideas for renovations. Write to them and include Problems they have now Suggestions to change How they could make these changes

A local school is requesting ideas for renovations. Write to them and include Problems they have now Suggestions to change How they could make these changes 0k8q

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you about some interesting idea how to takle the problem with summer sport facility which we can build near your school for children. As I know you do not have any place like stadium or sport yard for football or other activities for pupil which learning in your school. Fortunately in front of your main building we have empty field and after request for our major he agree to give this land for building some sport facilities for children. From your school need to send a letter to major office with description of this facility and short plan how you can use it and what activities you want to build in this spot yard. If you ask about help from our community volonteers I will help to build it faster and cheeper. I try to motivate parents but your help in this issue might be useful for me too. I hope you will find time and motivation to solve this task and local children might enjoy activity on this sport yard next year. You can contac me and we can discuss this topic more detailed. Yours faithfully, John Dou

Dear Sir or Madam,

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 yard for football or other activities for pupil which learning in your school. Fortunately
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sport
 facilities for children.

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send
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use
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. I try to motivate parents This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
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help
 in this issue might be useful for me too.

I hope you will find time and motivation to solve this task and local children might enjoy activity on this You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfunathleticspastimegame
sport
 yard next
 year.

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 we can discuss this topic more detailed.

Yours faithfully
,

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