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You were supposed to go on an interview in a few weeks, but you have since found out you cannot go on the date arranged. Write a letter to the potential employer. In your letter, tell them why you need to move the interview time ask to change the interview date explain that you are still interested in being interviewed for the job

You were supposed to go on an interview in a few weeks, but you have since found out you cannot go on the date arranged. Write a letter to the potential employer. In your letter, tell them why you need to move the interview time ask to change the interview date explain that you are still interested in being interviewed for the job qEJa
Dear Mr Brown, I am writing this letter to inform you that I will not be able to attend an interview which was scheduled on 20th February this month. I sincerly apologize for the inconvinience. I have received call from your office to set up an interview for the post of admin on 20th February which I was agreed to attend. Unfortunatly, my freind invited me for his wedding on the same day. He is my childhood friend and I am not in position to deny his invitation. However, I am still willing to give interview if you could change the date. I will make my self available for the given date. I would love to join your company. Thus, I am requesting you to change the interview date. I apologize for the inconvinience. I hope you understand my situation and provide me new date and time for the interview. I am looking forward for your reply. Yours faithfully, Darek Jones
Dear Mr Brown,

I am writing this letter to inform you that I will not be able to attend an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
which
was scheduled
on 20th February this month. I
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sincerly
apologize for the
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inconvinience
.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
have received call from your office to set up an
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
for the post of admin on 20th February which I was
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agreed
to attend.
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Unfortunatly
, my
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freind
invited me for his wedding on the same day. He is my childhood
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friend and
I am not in position to deny his invitation.
However
, I am
still
willing to give
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
if you could
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the
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date
. I will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
make
my self available for the
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given
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date
. I would
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love
to
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join
your
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company
.
Thus
, I am requesting you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
date
. I apologize for the
Possible spelling mistake found.
inconvinience
.

I hope you understand my situation and provide me new
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
date
and time for the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
am looking forward for your reply.

Yours
faithfully
,

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Darek
Jones

IELTS letter You were supposed to go on an interview in a few weeks, but you have since found out you cannot go on the date arranged. Write a letter to the potential employer. In your letter, tell them why you need to move the interview time ask to change the interview date explain that you are still interested in being interviewed for the job

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160 words
6.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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