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You recently read about a volunteer opportunity overseas. Write a letter to ask about applying. In your letter:

You recently read about a volunteer opportunity overseas. Write a letter to ask about applying. In your letter: MBK5L
Dear Sir/Madam: I am writing this letter with regard to the volunteer opportunity for doctors I saw advertised in the Daily Mail. As described in the advertisement, the position you are seeking to fill is for a doctor with a desire to travel to Africa for six months of the year. I understand that the position would not require treating unusual diseases, but instead would primarily focus on general preventative measures and practices. This appeals to me on several levels. I find the medical work here fascinating, and I have always loved to travel. In the past, I have gone to various East African countries, but I very much look forward to visiting other parts of the continent. My experience and skills make me an excellent fit for this position. As a general practitioner, I believe I am well qualified to assist your organization’s patients. Additionally, my superiors have frequently noted by ability to adapt well to new situations. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours faithfully, Rachel Dale
Dear Sir/Madam:

I am writing this letter with regard to the volunteer opportunity for doctors I
saw
advertised in the Daily Mail.

As
described
in the advertisement, the position you are seeking to fill is for a doctor with a desire to travel to Africa for six months of the year. I understand that the position would not require treating unusual diseases,
but
instead
would
primarily
focus on general preventative measures and practices.

This appeals to me on several levels. I find the medical work here fascinating, and I have always
loved
to travel. In the past, I have gone to various East African countries,
but
I
very
much look forward to visiting other parts of the continent.

My experience and
skills
make
me an excellent fit for this position. As a general practitioner, I believe I am well qualified to assist your organization’s patients.
Additionally
, my superiors have
frequently
noted by ability to adapt well to new situations.

Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours
faithfully
,

Rachel Dale
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IELTS letter You recently read about a volunteer opportunity overseas. Write a letter to ask about applying. In your letter:

Letter
  American English
8 paragraphs
169 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.5
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 7.0
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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