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The office where you work does not have a proper car park. Write a letter to your manager and say

The office where you work does not have a proper car park. Write a letter to your manager and say WEeED

Dear Sir, I would like to outline an area that is causing inconvenience to a large group of our employees, which has come to light in our recent staff survey. Please allow me to elaborate. While all the employees rated our infrastructure to be the best in business, a considerable amount of employees, almost 70% of them, expressed their dissatisfaction with the parking area. You see, when our office shifted to this new building 3 years back, there were only 200 employees, and the 250 parking spots were sufficient for staff and visitors. But with the company's expansion last year, as you already know, we now have 300 employees working for us. As a result, there are not enough parking lots for all our staff members since 270 out of 300 commute to work in their own cars, and thus some employees are forced to park their cars outside of the office area, which leaves their vehicles vulnerable to thieves and robbers. Thus, I reckon that we rent the empty space adjacent to our office, which is open for lease, and use it as a parking area. If we fulfill our employee's demand by providing them with the parking spots they need, then it will raise our overall employee satisfaction index by a huge margin, which can help us secure a position in Force’s top 100 best places to work. Thanks and looking forward to see the new implementation as soon as possible, Yours faithfully, Abc

Dear Sir,

I would like to outline an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
that is
 causing inconvenience to a large group of our You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmemberlaborerclerkworkeragentrepresentative
employees
, which has This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :approacharrive
come
 to light in our recent staff survey. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
Please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :authorize
allow
 me to elaborate.

While all the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmemberlaborerclerkworkeragentrepresentative
employees
 rated our infrastructure to be the best in business, a considerable amount of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmemberlaborerclerkworkeragentrepresentative
employees
, almost 70% of them, expressed their dissatisfaction with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. You This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
, when our office shifted to this new building 3 years back, there were This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 200 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmemberlaborerclerkworkeragentrepresentative
employees
, and the 250 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
 spots were sufficient for staff and visitors. This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
But
 with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
's expansion last year, as you already know, we This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 have 300 You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmemberlaborerclerkworkeragentrepresentative
employees
 working for us. As a result
, there are not This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:abundance
enough
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
 lots for all our staff members since 270 out of 300 Possible agreement error. The noun 'commute' seems to be countable, so consider using: "commutes".commutes
commute
 to work in their This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :possess
own
 cars, and thus
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmemberlaborerclerkworkeragentrepresentative
employees
are forced
 to park their cars This phrase is redundant. Consider using "outside".outside
outside of
 the office You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
, which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :departs
leaves
 their vehicles vulnerable to thieves and robbers.

Thus
, I reckon that we rent the empty space adjacent to our office, which is open for lease, and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 it as a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfieldoperationrangespace
area
. If we fulfill our employee's demand by providing them with the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withlawnsquaregardenestateplazaplace
parking
 spots they need, then it will raise our overall
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withmemberlaborerclerkworkeragentrepresentative
employee
 satisfaction index by a huge margin, which can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :assistassistance
help
 us secure a position in Force’s top 100 best places to work.

Thanks and looking forward to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witness
see
 the new implementation as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible,

Yours faithfully
,

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