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You recently organized an all-day meeting for your company, which took place in a local hotel.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to you regarding the event which was held in your hotel last week. After getting feedbacks from our participant about the event, I found that they liked your hotel environment due to its nice and lovely design, friendly staffs feedback from our participant about the event, I found that they liked your hotel environment due to its nice and lovely design, friendly staff, and easy-reached location. Despite all the positive feedbacks about the hotel, there is are some negative ones regarding the served foods. As the feedback reported, the diversity of foods was limited. For instance, vegetarian food were was served and therefore, some? ? ? persons did not eat anythings. In addition, the quality of the food was not acceptable, and they were not cooked perfectly. As we are interested in your hotel and we want to hold more future events there, I strongly suggest that you to should improve your food in terms of quality and diversity. Also, consider including Halal foods to in your menu as a major part of our guests are from Muslem Muslim countries. Thank you for your consideration. Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Ali

Dear Sir or Madam,

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event
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 in your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 last week. After getting You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommentreactionobservationassessmentcriticismevaluation
feedbacks
 from our participant about the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
, I found that they liked your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 environment due to its nice and lovely design, friendly staffs You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommentreactionobservationassessmentcriticismevaluation
feedback
 from our participant about the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
event
, I found that they liked your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtavernhousemotelresortinnlodging
hotel
 environment due to its nice and lovely design, friendly staff, and easy-reached location.

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positive
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feedbacks
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. As the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcommentreactionobservationassessmentcriticismevaluation
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some
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 did not eat anythings. In addition
, the quality of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
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 was not acceptable, and they were not cooked perfectly
.

As we are interested
 in your Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).hotel, and
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 we want to hold more future You use this word too often, consider replacing it withaffaircrisisceremonystorythingholiday
events
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 suggest that you to should This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :ameliorate
improve
 your You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 in terms of quality and diversity. Also
, consider including Halal You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
foods
 to in your menu as a major part of our guests are from Possible spelling mistake found.Muslim
Muslem
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Thank you for your consideration.

Yours sincerely
,

Yours faithfully
,

Ali