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YOU RECENTLY ORDERED AN ITEM OF CLOTHING THROUGH A STORE'S WEBSITE. WHEN YOU RECEIVED IT, YOU DISCOEVERED THAT IT WAS WRONG SIZE AND COLOR.

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Dear Sir, This is to bring to your kind attention to complain about receiving a wrong outfit that, I, had ordered from your store's website last Friday. I had ordered a Black, long sleeve kurta, which is of size UK 44, with 3 pockets and a design of peacock sitting over a flute and the length of the Kurta was supposed to be 4 feet. When the package arrived, to my surprise the Kurta was a grey black and short sleeve. The design was supposed to be a peacock but unfortunately, it turned to be a cow feeding grass. The kurta had only 2 side pockets. I assume that the delivery must have been wrong or if it was wrongly sent from the store. I would like to return the dress back immediately and would like to receive the dress that I wanted, or else, kindly refund the entire amount including shipping charges. I hope to hear from you soon. Kind regards, Anish G.
Dear Sir,

This is to bring to your kind attention to complain about receiving a
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wrong
outfit that, I, had ordered from your store's website last Friday.

I had ordered a Black, long sleeve
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kurta
, which is of size UK 44, with 3 pockets and a design of peacock sitting over a flute and the length of the
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Kurta
was supposed
to be
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4 feet
.

When the package arrived, to my surprise the
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Kurta
was a
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grey
black and short sleeve. The design
was supposed
to be a peacock
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but
unfortunately, it turned to be a cow feeding grass. The
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kurta
had
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only
2 side pockets. I assume that the delivery
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must
have been
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wrong
or if it was
wrongly
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sent
from the store.

I would like to return the dress back immediately and would like to receive the dress that I wanted, or else, kindly refund the entire amount including shipping charges.

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I
hope to hear from you
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soon
.

Kind regards,

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Anish
G.

IELTS letter YOU RECENTLY ORDERED AN ITEM OF CLOTHING THROUGH A STORE'S WEBSITE. WHEN YOU RECEIVED IT, YOU DISCOEVERED THAT IT WAS WRONG SIZE AND COLOR.

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