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Write a letter to a construction company which has the plan for building new houses in your neighbourhood

Write a letter to a construction company which has the plan for building new houses in your neighbourhood BJwA6
I am writing regarding new houses which are planned to be built by your company in the Golosyivska area. I have seen the building plan on your website today while searching for new constructions for my friend. I would like to mention that it was easy as the web design of your site is quite userfriendly. I am excited how convenient this new area will be, as well as how modern and expensive houses will look. Moreover, you have contemplated a green belt in your plan which will be so captivating for people. There is only one thing I would suggest if I can. It would be great if there was a playground for children near the green zone. In addition, there is a problem with car parking in our area and after you finish the construction, many drivers from existing houses can take new parking places in this planned area. Therefore, it would be perfect to add additional car parking in this plan. It would make this area full of all necessities. I am looking forward to hearing your opinion about my suggestion from you soon
I am writing regarding
new
houses
which
are planned
to
be built
by your
company
in the
Golosyivska
area.

I have
seen
the building plan on your website
today
while searching for
new
constructions for my friend.
I
would like to mention that it was easy as the web design of your site is quite
userfriendly
.

I
am excited
how convenient this
new
area
will be,
as well
as how modern and expensive
houses
will look.
Moreover
, you have contemplated a green belt in your plan which will be
so
captivating for
people
.

There is
only
one thing I would suggest if I can. It would be great if there was a playground for children near the green zone.
In addition
, there is a problem with car parking in our
area
and after you finish the construction,
many
drivers from existing
houses
can take
new
parking places in this planned
area
.
Therefore
, it would be perfect to
add
additional car parking in this plan. It would
make
this
area
full of all necessities.

I am looking forward to hearing your opinion about my suggestion from you
soon
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IELTS letter Write a letter to a construction company which has the plan for building new houses in your neighbourhood

Letter
  American English
5 paragraphs
186 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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