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Your friend wants to visit your town. Write a letter to him giving information about the town. In your letter include : 1. what is the good time for visit? 2. describe some interesting places to visit 3. what accomodation is better for his stay?

Your friend wants to visit your town. Write a letter to him giving information about the town. In your letter include: 1. what is the good time for visit? 2. describe some interesting places to visit 3. what accomodation is better for his stay? RNRq8
Dear Abhi, Hope you are doing well. I can't tell you how excited I got after reading your last letter about your travel plan to Mumbai this year and I'm writing this letter to share with you some important information about the town which may help you in booking and preparing your itinerary. You should plan your trip somewhere between July to September, since during that time you can experience the world-famous rainy season of the city. Moreover, the city is surrounded by mountains and in the rainy season, the overall view of Mumbai becomes breath-taking! You can start your trip from Mumbai Devi temple, which is an ancient temple, around 200 years old. This place is believed to be protecting the city since the time of its inception. You'll be surprised to know that the city is named on this Temple. Then you can also visit India-Gate which is again a famous monument here. Travellers from all across the country come to specially visit here. Later during the weekends, you can visit some beaches attached to the town, popular for their authentic coastal cuisines. I suggest you book Taj hotel for the accommodation as it is nearest to all the suggested spots and is known for its traditional Indian ambience. Can't wait to meet you here. Love, Sweta Singh
Dear
Abhi
,

Hope you are doing well. I can't
tell
you how excited I
got
after reading your last letter about your travel plan to Mumbai this year and I'm writing this letter to share with you
some
important
information about the town which may
help
you in booking and preparing your itinerary.

You should plan your trip somewhere between July to September, since during that time you can experience the world-
famous
rainy season of the city.
Moreover
, the city
is surrounded
by mountains and in the rainy season, the
overall
view of Mumbai becomes breath-taking!

You can
start
your trip from Mumbai Devi temple, which is an ancient temple, around 200 years
old
. This place
is believed
to be protecting the city since the time of its inception. You'll
be surprised
to know that the city
is named
on this Temple. Then you can
also
visit India-Gate which is again a
famous
monument here.
Travellers
from all across the country
come
to
specially
visit here. Later during the weekends, you can visit
some
beaches attached to the town, popular for their authentic coastal cuisines.

I suggest you book
Taj
hotel for the accommodation as it is nearest to all the suggested spots and
is known
for its traditional Indian ambience.

Can't wait to
meet
you here.

Love
,

Sweta
Singh
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IELTS letter Your friend wants to visit your town. Write a letter to him giving information about the town. In your letter include: 1. what is the good time for visit? 2. describe some interesting places to visit 3. what accomodation is better for his stay?

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  American English
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219 words
6.0
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