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You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was unusable. Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it

You recently ordered a small item online but when it arrived it was unusable. Write a letter to the company that sold you the item. In the letter: give details about the order you made explain what was wrong with the item tell the company what you want them to do about it dQyr

Dear Sir or Madam, Last Monday, I ordered earphones for my mobile phone Samsung A51s via your website. I was extremely excited when I received the order but in no time it turned into disappointment it was completely opposite of what had been promised during the purchase. In relation to the specifics of the order, I made the purchase through your website called “Mobile Gadgets” on March 1st using my PayPal account. The order number is 172435 and I am attaching a copy of receipt with this letter. To begin with, I placed an order for grey colored earphones but to my surprise the product received was green in color. Moreover, as soon as I plugged in the earphones I discovered that only one side was working which is a manufacturing defect. Being a valuable customer of a reputed eCommerce company, I can never expect this kind of service as I have made quite a number of purchases earlier as well and never faced this kind of challenge earlier. Since I really want this product because of its amazing features and reasonable price so as a resolution, I would like you to kindly replace the product as soon as possible as it carries six month warranty period. Hope to get the resolution at the earliest. Yours’ faithfully Xyz

Dear Sir or Madam,

Last Monday, I ordered earphones for my mobile phone Samsung A51s via your website. I was extremely
 excited when I received the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withformstructuresystemruleregulationplan
order
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 in no time it turned into disappointment it was completely opposite of what had been promised
 during the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
.

In relation to the specifics of the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withformstructuresystemruleregulationplan
order
, I made the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
purchase
 through your website called “Mobile Gadgets” on March 1st using my PayPal account. The You use this word too often, consider replacing it withformstructuresystemruleregulationplan
order
 number is Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).172435, and
172435 and
 I am attaching a copy of receipt with this letter.

To This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :initiatecommence
begin
 with, I placed an You use this word too often, consider replacing it withformstructuresystemruleregulationplan
order
 for Possible spelling mistake. 'grey' is British English.gray
grey
 colored earphones This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 to my surprise the product received was A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.green
green in color
. Moreover
, as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as I plugged in the earphones I discovered that This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 one side was working which is a manufacturing defect. Being a valuable customer of a reputed Possible spelling mistake found.e-commercecommerce
eCommerce
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
, I can never This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipate
expect
 this kind of service as I have made quite a number of This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquires
purchases
 earlier Comparison requires "than", not 'then' nor 'as'.than
as
 well and never faced this kind of challenge earlier.

Since I really
 want this product This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 of its amazing features and reasonable price This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 as a resolution, I would like you to kindly replace the product as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible as it carries It seems that a hyphen is missing.six-month
six month
 warranty period.

Hope to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 the resolution at the earliest.

An apostrophe is never used to form possessive case pronouns. Did you mean: "Yours"?Yours
Yours’
faithfully


Possible spelling mistake found.XYZAYZCYZXYLYYZ
Xyz