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You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job.

You have seen an advertisement in an English newspaper for a job working in the City Museum shop during the holidays. You decide to apply for the job. 0eYQ

Dear Sir, The reason why I'm writing to you is because I read an ad in the newspaper about the City Museum vacancy for this holidays. My name is John Doe, I'm 20 years old. I'm student in the Hurbert college on a faculty of science on second year. As well I'm a big fan of history. Of cource, I have some experience as a seller. In 2019 I was selling clothes for fans of baseball and souvenirs in Target Field from 5th of May to 12th of September. Currently I'm studing in the college and don't have too much free time, so, this is all my experience for now. I think that this pisition will fit me. I now how to catch people's attention. The most important - I know the measure. If person don't want to buy or don't know what to choose I can always help. I like to read about past, especially about dinosaurs. The Origin of Species which is written by Darwin - the favorite one. In the end I would like to say that if you are interested in me, write to email: john. doe@gmail. com or call on 1 252 434 76 44 (I have this number in WhatsApp as well). Have a great day! Waiting for your reply. Yours faithfully, John Doe

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Have a great day! Waiting for your reply. Yours faithfully
,

John Doe