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You recently had a holiday visiting your friend and you stayed in their house

Dear Sana, I am writing to you to thank you for extending an invitation to stay at your home during our holiday. During stay at your home, I enjoyed every single activity, but the most enjoyable experience was the delicious food that you cooked for us. Every time you made sure to try different dishes and allowed us to taste a variety of flavours. The time spend at your house was the most peaceful time that I experienced. During our stay, we clicked lots of pictures. I can recall all the memories by seeing the pictures with my family. With this letter, I am sending the pictures so that we can also re-live the moments which we had together. I wish we can meet again soon.

Dear Sana,

I am writing to you to thank you for extending an invitation to stay at your home during our holiday. During stay at your home, I enjoyed every single activity, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 the most enjoyable experience was the delicious food that you cooked for us. Every time you made sure to try This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 dishes and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:admissible
allowed
 us to taste a variety of Possible spelling mistake. ‘flavours’ is British English.flavors
flavours
. The time spend at your This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :residence
house
 was the most peaceful time that I experienced.

During our stay, we clicked lots of pictures. I can recall all the memories by seeing the pictures with my family. With this letter, I am sending the pictures This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 that we can also
 re-This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :reside
live
 the moments which we had together. I wish we can This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :attain
meet
 again This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
. 

IELTS letter You recently had a holiday visiting your friend and you stayed in their house

Letter

American English

3 paragraphs

126 words

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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1

4.0

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5

Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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One main idea per paragraph
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Include an introduction and conclusion
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Support main points with an explanation and then an example
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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Vary your linking phrases using synonyms

Lexical Resource: 6.0

Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
Check your writing for errors

Task Achievement: 6.5

Answer all parts of the question
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Present relevant ideas
Fully explain these ideas
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Support ideas with relevant, specific examples

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