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You recently had a holiday visiting your friend and you stayed in their house

Dear Sana, I am writing to you to thank you for extending an invitation to stay at your home during our holiday. During stay at your home, I enjoyed every single activity, but the most enjoyable experience was the delicious food that you cooked for us. Every time you made sure to try different dishes and allowed us to taste a variety of flavours. The time spend at your house was the most peaceful time that I experienced. During our stay, we clicked lots of pictures. I can recall all the memories by seeing the pictures with my family. With this letter, I am sending the pictures so that we can also re-live the moments which we had together. I wish we can meet again soon.
Dear Sana,

I am writing to you to thank you for extending an invitation to stay at your home during our holiday. During stay at your home, I enjoyed every single activity,
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the most enjoyable experience was the delicious food that you cooked for us. Every time you made sure to try
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different
dishes and
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allowed
us to taste a variety of
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flavours
. The time spend at your
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house
was the most peaceful time that I experienced.

During our stay, we clicked lots of pictures. I can recall all the memories by seeing the pictures with my family. With this letter, I am sending the pictures
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so
that we can
also
re-
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live
the moments which we had together. I wish we can
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meet
again
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soon
.
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IELTS letter You recently had a holiday visiting your friend and you stayed in their house

Letter
  American English
3 paragraphs
126 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
  • Structure your answers in logical paragraphs
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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