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Write a letter to your friend and inform her about the damage which occur to the book that you borrowed from her

Dear Sana, Dear Emily, Sorry it’s taken me so long to write to you but at last I put pen to paper to explain why I haven’t returned that book which I borrowed from you. To be honest, I have been feeling so guilty that I delayed writing to you. I have to own up that I damaged the book accidently. I am so sorry. I know how important that book is to you as it was passed down from your late grandmother. What happened is that I had been reading up on the chapter about “excel in future” when I knocked over my cup of coffee which splashed all over the book. Most of the stain is on the pages that were open at that time. I have sent the book away to be repaired. I didn’t realise that was even possible until I researched it. Anyway, it should be as good as new when I get it back next week and then I’ll send it on to you. Again, I am so sorry to delay in telling you. I hope you can forgive me. Best wishes Farida

Dear Sana,

Dear Emily,

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explain
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book
 which I borrowed from you.

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so
 guilty that I delayed writing to you. I This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:ought to
have to
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own
 up that I damaged the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withessayalbumnovelpublicationdictionarypamphlet
book
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accidently
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book
 is to you as it was passed
 down from your late grandmother.

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book
. Most of the stain is on the pages that were open at that time.

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sent
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book
 away to be repaired
. I didn’t Possible spelling mistake. ‘realise’ is British English.realize
realise
 that was even possible until I researched it. Anyway, it should be as This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 as new when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 it back next
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week and
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send
 it on to you.

Again, I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 sorry to delay in telling you. I hope you can forgive me.

Best wishes

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Farida