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You have lost an item of value on a train. Write a letter to the railway company. In your letter, describe the item, explain where and when you left it and say what action you would like the company to take.

I am writing to report lost property. I forgot my camera on the train last week. It is a new camera I bought last week for 90 dollars. It is a black colour sleek model from Canon. It was freshly sealed in a thermocol case and enclosed in a white cardboard box. The entire size of the package would be around 10 to 12 cm in length and breadth. I lost this camera last Friday evening while travelling on the central line. I boarded the fast train from Andheri station at 6: 30 PM. I got into the first-class compartment which was around midway through the platform. I had several bags with me including the camera box. Due to less space in the upper racks, I put my camera box under the seat. Unfortunately, I forgot to take it while getting off at Mulund station. I purchased this camera with the intention to gift it to someone. I am very eager to get it back. I earnestly request you to ask your staff to search the compartment. I would be really grateful to you. If you find it please give me a call on my number 1234567890. Thank you for your support. Yours sincerely

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camera
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camera
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 case and enclosed in a white cardboard box. The entire size of the package would be around 10 to 12 cm in length and breadth.

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camera
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fast
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Andheri
 station at 6: 30 PM. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
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got
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 compartment which was around midway through the platform. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 had several bags with me including the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
 box. Due to less space in the upper racks, I put my You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcamcorder
camera
 box under the seat. Unfortunately, I forgot to take it while getting off at Possible spelling mistake found.MoundMulledMulan
Mulund
 station.

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purchased
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camera
 with the intention to gift it to someone. I am This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 eager to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquire
get
 it back. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
earnestly
 request you to ask your staff to search the compartment. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.Furthermore, ILikewise, INot only that, but I
I
 would be really
 grateful to you. “If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
 you find it This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :satisfy
please
 give me a call on my number 1234567890.

Thank you for your support.

Yours sincerely