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you recently forgot your watch at the gym . the watch is important to you becayuse it was a gift from your grandparents.

you recently forgot your watch at the gym. the watch is important to you becayuse it was a gift from your grandparents. MBNOe

Dear Gym manager, I am writing this email because I forgot my watch at the gym this morning. In my training this morning, I was using it in the Pilates section, so I believe that it supposed to be there or maybe someone took it and I hope they gave my watch to the receptionist. Another important thing is this is an Apple black smartwatch with my photo in the background. This smartwatch is much important to me because it belonged to my grandfather which passed away last year and I have good memories when I saw this clock in my wrist. However, it is very expensive to buy another one and now, I cannot do it due to my company laid off me in the beginning of this mouth. Consequently, I have just a pocket money in my bank account. I hope you can give a good news as soon as possible, and for reaching me out you can reply this email or call me at (236)236 1234 anytime. Sincerely, Alyson Rosario

Dear Gym manager,

I am writing this email This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 I forgot my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 at the gym this morning. In my training this morning, I was using it in the Pilates section, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:consequently
so
 I believe that it supposed to be there or maybe someone took it and I hope they gave my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :monitor
watch
 to the receptionist. Another This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 thing is this is an Apple black smartwatch with my photo in the background.

This smartwatch is much This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 to me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:due to the factin light of the fact thatowing to the fact that
because
 it belonged to my grandfather which passed away last year and I have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 memories when I This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
saw
 this clock in my wrist. However
, it is This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:extremelyimmenselysupremelysuperb
very
 expensive to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :purchase
buy
 another one and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
, I cannot do it due to my This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 laid off me in the beginning of this mouth. Consequently
, I have This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:merely
just
Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply "pocket money".pocket money
a pocket money
 in my bank account.

I hope you can give a This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :beneficialproduct
good
 news as This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:in the near future
soon
 as possible, and for reaching me out you can reply this email or call me at (236)236 1234 anytime.

Sincerely
,

Alyson Rosario