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You recently flew with an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. Write a letter to the company.

You recently flew with an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. Write a letter to the company. 1npXW

Dear Sir or Madam, This is in regards with the Issues I faced while travelling with your Airline on 5th August 2021, flight no. IR5021. I would like to draw your attention towards food provided in the flight. I am a frequent traveller with your airlines, but during my last travel the food that was served was not fresh and was smelling bad. I was served with rice, curry and bread. To my surprise not only me but other passengers also raised a similar concern to the attending crew. Such spoilt food intake can cause severe health issues, even food poison is a possibility. As a reputed airline you need to keep a tab on such details and food being an important part more vigilant attention is required. Hope you have got my point and this will be taken on utmost priority and strict actions will be taken against the food company and also the checking staff. Thanks, Nirav Patel

Dear Sir or Madam,

This is in regards with the Issues I faced while travelling with your Airline on 5th August 2021, flight no. IR5021. I would like to draw your attention towards You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 provided in the flight.

I am a frequent Possible spelling mistake found.travelertravelled
traveller
 with your airlines, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 during my last travel the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 that was served
 was not fresh and The verb 'smelling' is a stative verb and sometimes the progressive form is not correct. Try a simple form instead.
was smelling
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :evil
bad
. Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
was served
 with rice, curry and bread. To my surprise not This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 me This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 other passengers also
 raised a similar concern to the attending crew. Such Possible spelling mistake. 'spoilt' is British English.spoiled
spoilt
You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 intake can cause severe health issues, even You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 poison is a possibility.

As a reputed airline you need to This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :retain
keep
 a tab on such This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :particulars
details
 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
 being an This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:vitalcriticalessential
important
 part more vigilant attention is required
. Hope you have This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
got
 my point and this will be taken
 on utmost priority and strict actions will be taken
 against the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withfeedcuisinesnackmeatdrinkfoodstuff
food
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :enterprisecorporation
company
 and also
 the checking staff.

Thanks,

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 Patel