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You recently flew with an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. Write a letter to the company.

You recently flew with an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. Write a letter to the company. 1npXW
Dear Sir or Madam, This is in regards with the Issues I faced while travelling with your Airline on 5th August 2021, flight no. IR5021. I would like to draw your attention towards food provided in the flight. I am a frequent traveller with your airlines, but during my last travel the food that was served was not fresh and was smelling bad. I was served with rice, curry and bread. To my surprise not only me but other passengers also raised a similar concern to the attending crew. Such spoilt food intake can cause severe health issues, even food poison is a possibility. As a reputed airline you need to keep a tab on such details and food being an important part more vigilant attention is required. Hope you have got my point and this will be taken on utmost priority and strict actions will be taken against the food company and also the checking staff. Thanks, Nirav Patel
Dear Sir or Madam,

This is in regards with the Issues I faced while travelling with your Airline on 5th August 2021, flight no. IR5021. I would like to draw your attention towards
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food
provided in the flight.

I am a frequent
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traveller
with your airlines,
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but
during my last travel the
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food
that
was served
was not fresh and
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was smelling
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bad
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I
was served
with rice, curry and bread. To my surprise not
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only
me
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but
other passengers
also
raised a similar concern to the attending crew. Such
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spoilt
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food
intake can cause severe health issues, even
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food
poison is a possibility.

As a reputed airline you need to
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keep
a tab on such
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details
and
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food
being an
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important
part more vigilant attention
is required
. Hope you have
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got
my point and this will
be taken
on utmost priority and strict actions will
be taken
against the
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food
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company
and
also
the checking staff.

Thanks,

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Nirav
Patel

IELTS letter You recently flew with an airline and had a problem with the food on the plane. Write a letter to the company.

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159 words
6.0
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