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write an email to your colleague to apologize for not going to a scheduled meeting

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Dear John, I am deeply sorry for missing our scheduled meeting on 15th October 2016, regarding the discussion of the latest project, As you might understand, I was unable to come for the meeting because my flight was delayed by 20 hours due to extremely poor weather conditions in New York. I tried to inform you through a call but the networks failed to work at that time. This meeting wit you was very important as I was to discuss all the working directions and the product requirements for our new project. I would like to settle an another meeting with you for the upcoming week. I would be available from 25th October to 30th October, anytime before 7: 00 P. M. Please let me know whatever time best suits you by 20th October so that i book a ticket for myself, beforehand. You can contact me on 878799: I look forward to seeing youSincerely, Julia
Dear John, I am
deeply
sorry for missing our scheduled
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
on 15th October 2016, regarding the discussion of the latest project, As you might understand, I was unable to
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come
for the
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meeting
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because
my flight
was delayed
by 20 hours due to
extremely
poor weather conditions in New York. I tried to inform you through a call
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but
the networks failed to work at that time. This
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
wit you was
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very
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important
as I was to discuss all the working directions and the product requirements for our new project. I would like to settle an another
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
meeting
with you for the upcoming week. I would be available from 25th October to 30th October, anytime
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before
7: 00 P. M.
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Please
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let
me know whatever time best suits you by 20th October
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so
that
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i
book a ticket for myself, beforehand. You can contact me on 878799: I look forward to seeing
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youSincerely
,
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Julia

IELTS letter write an email to your colleague to apologize for not going to a scheduled meeting

Letter
  American English
1 paragraphs
155 words
5.0
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