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You have been facing a lot of issues at work lately. Write a letter to your Reporting Manager informing him about this. In your letter: • Explain what / who is affecting your work and people's attitude towards you • What your expectations are from this work/office • How / what your manager can do to help you with these problems You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir, I am writing this letter to let you about a problem that I am facing since few weeks which is adversely affecting on my performance at work. I use office transport to travel to and back from office. However, there are issues related to cab route which has become a huge trouble for me. I live in Gurgaon whereas I have been aligned with people who live in Delhi. Since, the time my cab route has been shifted with people from Delhi location I have started getting late for office as there are delays in my pickup. As a result, I often miss my targets and this is impacting my work. I have made several complaints about the same to the transport department, however, I have not got any positive response from their end. I would request you to take this up with the transport head and re-align my route so that I can reach office on time. I would appreciate your immediate attention to this matter. Yours Sincerely, Yishu

Dear Sir,

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 on time.

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