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You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights.you live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter .explain where you live, describe the problem, give reasons why you do not want this development.

Dear sir, I am writing this letter to express my annoyance with the development of Williams lake airport. I am residing in 12th avenue close to the airport which is very and quite area. Our local authorities are planning to develop the airport. As this a small town people prefer to commute by their own vehicle. Therefore, there is no need for bigger airport. Probably after developing that area numbers of flights will be increasing and more visitors could be seen over there. It will cause noise and more crowd. As in this area people are very quit. They wouldn't like that environment. I am looking forward to hear from you. Yours sincerely, Adam
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to express my annoyance with the development of Williams lake
airport
. I am residing in 12th avenue close to the
airport
which is
very
and quite area. Our local authorities are planning to develop the
airport
.
As
this a
small
town
people
prefer to commute by their
own
vehicle.
Therefore
, there is no need for bigger
airport
.
Probably
after developing that area numbers of flights will be increasing and more visitors could be
seen
over there. It will cause noise and more crowd.
As
in this area
people
are
very
quit. They wouldn't like that environment. I am looking forward
to hear
from you. Yours
sincerely
,
Adam
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IELTS letter You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. you live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter. explain where you live, describe the problem, give reasons why you do not want this development.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
113 words
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5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Include an introduction and conclusion
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    Support main points with an explanation and then an example
  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
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  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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