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You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights.you live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter .explain where you live, describe the problem, give reasons why you do not want this development.

Dear sir, I am writing this letter to express my annoyance with the development of Williams lake airport. I am residing in 12th avenue close to the airport which is very and quite area. Our local authorities are planning to develop the airport. As this a small town people prefer to commute by their own vehicle. Therefore, there is no need for bigger airport. Probably after developing that area numbers of flights will be increasing and more visitors could be seen over there. It will cause noise and more crowd. As in this area people are very quit. They wouldn't like that environment. I am looking forward to hear from you. Yours sincerely, Adam
Dear sir, I am writing this letter to express my annoyance with the development of Williams lake
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
airport
. I am residing in 12th avenue close to the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
airport
which is
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very
and quite area. Our local authorities are planning to develop the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
airport
.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
this a
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
small
town
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
prefer to commute by their
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
own
vehicle.
Therefore
, there is no need for bigger
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
airport
.
Probably
after developing that area numbers of flights will be increasing and more visitors could be
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
seen
over there. It will cause noise and more crowd.
“As” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
As
in this area
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
people
are
This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:
very
quit. They wouldn't like that environment. I am looking forward
In the grammatical structure ‘look + forward + to + verb’, the verb ‘to’ is used with the gerund: “to hearing”.
to hear
from you. Yours
sincerely
,
Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraph.
Adam

IELTS letter You are unhappy about a plan to make your local airport bigger and increase the number of flights. you live near the airport. Write a letter to your local newspaper. In your letter. explain where you live, describe the problem, give reasons why you do not want this development.

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  American English
1 paragraphs
113 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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Lexical Resource: 6.0
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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