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You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • Explain why you would like the job • Give details of why you would be suitable person to employ • Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter • Explain why you would like the job • Give details of why you would be suitable person to employ • Say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia Jemw

Dear Sir/Madam, This is in response to the advertisement you have posted in the Australian magazine where you have mentioned the requirement of employing a person to live with your family for six months and to look after your six-year-old child. I am keen to be a nanny by profession and looking for an opportunity for the same role you have offered. I believe, I would be the good fit for this role as I am a father of a eight-year-old child and I am aware of nurturing a child, how a child should be treated. If I would be lucky enough to get the offered role and to live with your family, I would love to spend my leisure time exploring the beautiful places in the country by visiting and I would love to convert the beauty of the country into a mesmerizing art work as I am fond of painting. Thank you for taking out time for reading my letter, I would love to be considered for this role. Look forward to hearing back from you. Please feel free to reach out to me at shaktiv598@gmail. com in case of any additional information required. Thanks & Regards Shakti Verma

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