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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear

Dear Mr. Smith, I am going to write this letter to inform you, I am doing a part-time evening course in your school. Now, I am unable to continue this course because of my full-time work. I am doing a job in a technical company. Previously, I am doing my job visiting the company during office hours. So, In the evening, I have time to take an extra class. But, because of coronavirus, I am starting my work from home and it is busier nowadays. I have to do work from morning to evening and do not have a fixed time. Due to this, I do not continue my course at this time. Whenever Covid-19 is finished and, I will be starting the company again then, I continue this course again. I am apologizing for this. And, I know you understand me and taking the right action on me. I look forward to hearing from you. your's sincerely, Amandeep Kaur. Tas
Dear Mr. Smith,

I am going to write this letter to inform you, I am doing a part-time evening
course
in your school.
Now
, I am unable to continue this
course
because
of my full-time work.

I am doing a job in a technical
company
. Previously, I am doing my job visiting the
company
during office hours.
So
, In the evening, I have time to take an extra
class
.
But
,
because
of coronavirus, I am starting my work from home and it is busier nowadays. I
have to
do work from morning to evening and do not have a
fixed
time. Due to this, I do not continue my
course
at this time.

Whenever Covid-19
is finished
and, I will be starting the
company
again then, I continue this
course
again. I am apologizing for this. And, I know you understand me and taking the right action on me. I look forward to hearing from you.

your's
sincerely
,

Amandeep
Kaur
.

Tas
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IELTS letter You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course. You now find that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter describe the situation explain why you cannot continue at this time say what action you would like to take You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
160 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 5.5
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  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 7.0
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.0
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    Present relevant ideas
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