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You want to tell your landlord that you are happy with the apartment in general, but there are some small repairs that need to be carried out. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter say what you like about the apartment describe the repairs that need to be made explain how the repairs will improve your quality of life

Dear Mr. Gupta Hi, hope you are doing good? I am drafting this letter to inform about the rented apartment and the facilities included. I am quite happy with the place but there are some minor issues that I would like to discuss with you. Firstly, I am impressed with the generous size of this suite as it meets my expectations. Moreover, the patio included on the backside is like cherry on the cake, as I love to spend time sitting and seeing the nature. Also, small dining space included with the kitchen is well maintained and the house is cleaned properly. Apart from this, there are some small issues that need to be taken in attention as soon as possible. There is a pipe leakage in the cooking area (near the sink) which could lead to severe hazard. In addition, the window in the bedroom is broken that can lead to some security problem. So, I would like to request you that please take some urgent steps in resolving these issues. I think, these small things if taken in regard will make a prestigious stay at this place. If I am out of the house; I could leave my things protected with any stress at my place. It will not only help me, but also will lead to extra life of the unit making it more secure and a safe place to live in. I will be grateful, if you look into this matter and try to make some arrangements to solve the issue in timely manner to get rid of any dangers in the future. Yours sincerely, Manjyot Saini
Dear Mr. Gupta

Hi, hope you are doing
good
?

I am drafting this letter to inform about the rented apartment and the facilities included. I am quite happy with the
place
but
there are
some
minor issues that I would like to discuss with you.

Firstly
, I
am impressed
with the generous size of this suite as it meets my expectations.
Moreover
, the patio included on the backside is like cherry on the cake, as I
love
to spend time sitting and seeing the nature.
Also
,
small
dining space included with the kitchen is well maintained and the
house
is cleaned
properly
.

Apart from this, there are
some
small
issues that need to
be taken
in attention as
soon
as possible. There is a pipe leakage in the cooking area (near the sink) which could lead to severe hazard.
In addition
, the window in the bedroom
is broken
that can lead to
some
security problem.
So
, I would like to request you that
please
take
some
urgent steps in resolving these issues.

I
think
, these
small
things if taken in regard will
make
a prestigious stay at this
place
. If I am out of the
house
; I could
leave
my things protected with any
stress
at my
place
. It will not
only
help
me,
but
also
will lead to extra life of the unit making it more secure and a safe
place
to
live
in.

I will be grateful, if you look into this matter and try to
make
some
arrangements to solve the issue in timely manner to
get
rid of any
dangers
in the future.

Yours
sincerely
,

Manjyot
Saini
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IELTS letter You want to tell your landlord that you are happy with the apartment in general, but there are some small repairs that need to be carried out. Write a letter to your landlord. In your letter say what you like about the apartment describe the repairs that need to be made explain how the repairs will improve your quality of life

Letter
  American English
9 paragraphs
270 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 5.5
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    Present relevant ideas
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