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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about an order placed on your website on 5th of this month. I ordered for a book on "Agile methodology" by Mr. Anubhav Sharma. The order number for this purchase is A123456 which also promises two day delivery. However, even after waiting for 2 weeks I ought to receive my order. This book is extremely important to my career as I need to appear for my certification exam in a week's time. Furthermore, the information in the book is unique and is not available on the internet, without which I will not be able to clear my certification exam. If your company will not be able to deliver my book in a couple of days, I would like full refund including delivery charges. I would appreciate if you could look into this matter at the earliest.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter to express my dissatisfaction about an order placed on your website on 5th of this month.

I ordered for a
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book
on
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"
Agile methodology
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by Mr. Anubhav Sharma. The order number for this
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purchase
is A123456 which
also
promises
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two day
delivery.
However
, even after waiting for 2 weeks I ought to receive my order.

This
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book
is
extremely
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important
to my career as I need to appear for my certification exam in a week's time.
Furthermore
, the information in the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
is unique and is not available on the internet, without which I will not be able to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
my certification exam.

If your
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company
will not be able to deliver my
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
book
in a couple of days, I would like full refund including delivery charges.

I would appreciate if you could look into this matter at the earliest.

IELTS letter abcasbjkagdjklwdbljSHCLADSVFKJBAS; KCVABLSKCBASJBCASHCANLKSCNBLSANBCKLAN

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