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You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course.Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer PVVDB
Dear Sir/Madam, It has been my privilege to give you the feedback about the course which I have finished last week. With reference to your letter dated on 10. 03. 2021, I would like to share my inputs towards the course. I was really excited before joining the course and your school has contributed almost the same joy to me while teaching. I had really enjoyed during the session. Besides, the knowledge shared by teachers was appreciated and effective. There are numerous organisation who offer such types of education but I have litterly grasped a lot in compare to my other friends knowledge. Later on, I have applied my studied course into the real kitchen and what I found that, my family were so happy with my dishes and performance. As per their experiance, they have never ever tasted such a delicious food in their life. Moreover, I have applied my study in many variety of food preparation to check the consistency of my techniques and ability. Furthermore, I would love to join another cookery course in future intern. Hence, kind request to share catalog for the course once available. Thank you for offering an exiting cookery courses and asking for feedback. Yours faithfully, Jignesh
Dear Sir/Madam,

It has been my privilege to give you the feedback about the
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course
which I have finished last week. With reference to your letter dated on 10. 03. 2021, I would like to share my inputs towards the course.

I was
really
excited
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before
joining the
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course
and your school has contributed almost the same joy to me while teaching. I had
really
enjoyed during the session.
Besides
, the knowledge shared by teachers
was appreciated
and effective. There are numerous
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organisation
who offer such types of education
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but
I have
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litterly
grasped a lot in compare to my other friends knowledge. Later on, I have applied my studied
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course
into the real kitchen and what I found that, my family were
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so
happy with my dishes and performance. As per their
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experiance
, they have never ever tasted such a delicious food in their life.

Moreover
, I have applied my study in
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many variety
of food preparation to
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check
the consistency of my techniques and ability.
Furthermore
, I would
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love
to
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join
another cookery
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course
in future intern.
Hence
, kind request to share catalog for the
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course
once available.

Thank you for offering an exiting cookery
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courses
and asking for feedback.

Yours
faithfully
,
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Jignesh
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IELTS letter You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer

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6.0
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