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id not work properly. You called customer service to report the problem but you have not yet received any help. Write a letter to the company and in your letter introduce yourself explain the problem and state what action you would like from the company Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses.

id not work properly. You called customer service to report the problem but you have not yet received any help. Write a letter to the company and in your letter introduce yourself explain the problem and state what action you would like from the company You do NOT need to write any addresses. Dll9j
Dear sir or madam, My name is Amit Shah and I am one of your frequent customers. I am writing this letter to report the faulty TV that I purchased from your company on Tuesday last week. On Tuesday, 12 June, I visited your store following a recommendation from friends to buy a Samsung LED TV which has the code 40L657B40. On purchasing this TV, I was assured that this was the latest model and the best buy. However, after installing the TV in home, I discovered that not only the remote control is unreliable but also the quality of the picture is quite blurry. I immediately called your customer Service Department which assured me of the replacement with a new TV within 2 days. I am disappointed to state that neither replacement nor repair has been undertaken by your people. Worst! the communication since then from our side is not even being properly responded. I am exceedingly displeased with both the quality of the product I purchased from your company as well as the poor service I have received since. I hope this problem will be resolved promptly. I expect to receive a replacement TV or have my current TV repair but only if it could be fixed within a day. I look forward to hearing back from you immediately. Thank you for your attention. Yours faithfully, Amit Shah
Dear sir or madam,

My name is Amit
Use a comma before 'and' if it connects two independent clauses (unless they are closely connected and short).
Shah and
I am one of your frequent customers. I am writing this letter to report the faulty TV that I
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purchased
from your
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company
on Tuesday last week.

On
Did you mean to refer to the current year? 12 June 2021 is not a Tuesday, but a Saturday.
Tuesday, 12 June
, I visited your store following a recommendation from friends to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
a Samsung LED TV which has the code 40L657B40. On purchasing this TV, I
was assured
that this was the latest model and the best
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
buy
.
However
, after installing the TV in home, I discovered that not
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
only
the remote control is unreliable
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but
also
the quality of the picture is quite blurry. I immediately called your customer Service Department which assured me of the replacement with a new TV within 2 days. I
am disappointed
to state that neither replacement nor repair has been undertaken by your
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people
. Worst!
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the
communication since then from our side is not even being
properly
responded.

I am
exceedingly
displeased with both the quality of the product I
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
purchased
from your
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
company
Probable usage error. Use "and" after 'both'.
as well as
the poor service I have received since. I hope this problem will
be resolved
promptly
.
Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
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expect
to receive a replacement TV or have my
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current
TV repair
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but
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only
if it could be
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fixed
within a day.

Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Consider rewording the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
I
look forward to hearing back from you immediately. Thank you for your attention.

Yours
faithfully
,

Amit Shah
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IELTS letter id not work properly. You called customer service to report the problem but you have not yet received any help. Write a letter to the company and in your letter introduce yourself explain the problem and state what action you would like from the company You do NOT need to write any addresses.

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  American English
7 paragraphs
229 words
6.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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