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you are an alumnus of a bluegill University, registered in a volunteer program to conduct informal interviews with prospective students. recently an entrant has been assigned to you to have an interview. write a letter to the entrance. in your -letter state your reason for writing -briefly describe the interview and inform the entrance of a possibility to cancel it -propose a convenient time for an interview

you are an alumnus of a bluegill University, registered in a volunteer program to conduct informal interviews with prospective students. recently an entrant has been assigned to you to have an interview. write a letter to the entrance. in your -letter state your reason for writing -briefly describe the interview and inform the entrance of a possibility to cancel it -propose a convenient time for an interview jRRga
Dear Alice, To begin with, I am an alumnus of bluegill university. Moreover, I conduct interviews with prospective students as part of management. I am aware that you are registered entrant and you have been assigned to me. Therefore, I will be conducting the interview. This letter would help you understand the evaluation process for admission. Since, our university is one of the top colleges in our country, Alumni interview would be structured. Request you to prepare on topics like personal, education and work experience including your project. I would also like to inform that this will be a Face-to face interview. We would want to know our students personally thereupon, we do not encourage online interviews. If there are any unforeseen situations you can choose to cancel this interview. Request you to let me know on before-hand. Next week, I will be available in the afternoon at the campus. If time permits, can we have the interview on March 12, afternoon at the admission office? Or please let me know your convenient time. Looking forward to hearing from you, Yours Sincerely, Nancy
Dear Alice,

To
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begin
with, I am an alumnus of bluegill university.
Moreover
, I conduct
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interviews
with prospective students as part of management. I am aware that you
are registered
entrant and you have
been assigned
to me.
Therefore
, I will be conducting the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
. This letter would
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
help
you understand the evaluation process for admission.

Since, our university is one of the top colleges in our country, Alumni
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
would
be structured
. Request you to prepare on topics like personal, education and work experience including your project. I would
also
like to inform that this will be a Face-to face
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
. We would want to know our students
personally
thereupon, we do not encourage online
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interviews
.
“If” at the beginning of a sentence usually requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
If
there are any unforeseen situations you can choose to cancel this
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
. Request you to
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know on
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before
-hand.

Next
week, I will be available in the afternoon at the campus. If time permits, can we have the
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
interview
on March 12, afternoon at the admission office? Or
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please
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
let
me know your convenient time.

Looking forward to hearing from you,

Yours
Sincerely
,

Nancy

IELTS letter you are an alumnus of a bluegill University, registered in a volunteer program to conduct informal interviews with prospective students. recently an entrant has been assigned to you to have an interview. write a letter to the entrance. in your -letter state your reason for writing -briefly describe the interview and inform the entrance of a possibility to cancel it -propose a convenient time for an interview

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