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You recently celebrated a special occasion in your personal life and received a card and a present from your colleagues at work. Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter: - remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was - thank them for the card and gift - explain why you like the gift and how you will use it

You recently celebrated a special occasion in your personal life and received a card and a present from your colleagues at work. Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter: - remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was - thank them for the card and gift - explain why you like the gift and how you will use it p3Xa
Dear Colleagues, I hope everyone is doing well. I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for the gesture I have received from all of you. As you all know that last week I got married; and right after the reception, we went to visit my grandparents in Karachi who could not come to the wedding. However, I came back to Lahore yesterday to this beautiful and thoughtful gift. I cannot thank you all enough for this wonderful gift and such a lovely card. It sure did make me emotional, especially the prayers and wishes written on the card. I do not have words to truly describe how special this gift and card are to me. The idea to gift me a massage chair is quite exquisite. I have been thinking of getting it on my own for some time now. Considering that I have back issues, it is very considerate of you people to gift me something that would benefit me and would allow me to relax. Thank you again for the gift and the card. Yours truly, Ifrah.
Dear Colleagues,

I hope everyone is doing well. I am writing this letter to express my gratitude for the gesture I have received from all of you.

As you all know that last week I
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married; and right after the reception, we went to visit my grandparents in Karachi who could not
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to the wedding.
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beautiful
and thoughtful gift.

I cannot thank you all
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enough
for this wonderful
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gift
and such a lovely card. It sure did
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make
me emotional,
especially
the prayers and wishes written on the card. I do not have words to
truly
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describe
how special this
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gift
and card are to me.

The
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idea
to
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gift
me a massage chair is quite exquisite. I have been thinking of getting it on my
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own
for
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time
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. Considering that I have back issues, it is
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very
considerate of you
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people
to
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gift
me something that would benefit me and would
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allow
me to relax.

Thank you again for the
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gift
and the card.

Yours
truly
,

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IELTS letter You recently celebrated a special occasion in your personal life and received a card and a present from your colleagues at work. Write a letter to your colleagues. In your letter: - remind your colleagues what the special occasion you were celebrating was - thank them for the card and gift - explain why you like the gift and how you will use it

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