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You have a seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter • Explain why you would be suitable for the job. • Say what else you could do for the family. • Give your reasons for waiting the job.

You have a seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter • Explain why you would be suitable for the job. • Say what else you could do for the family. • Give your reasons for waiting the job. 0PMB
Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing this letter with regard to your advertisement about the Spanish teacher who is required to teach you two children for a year. I am 40 years old Spanish working as a Spanish language teacher in a well-known private school in Madrid. Therefore, it will be my pleasure to apply for the occupation which you are looking for. The foremost reason of applying for this job is that I have 10 years’ experience in Spanish teaching field. I have a vast history of educating young pupils from 8 to 15 years old. Moreover, I am bilingual, and I can speak English fluently as well which will be easy to communicate with you and your children. I would like to inform you that in addition to Spanish, I am qualified to give private lessons of Math as well. As I studied Engineering for 5 years which is allowing me to teach Math for younger age. I was looking forward to immigrate to Australia since 1 year. However, I am searching for a suitable job to allow me to settle in the country. So, hopefully my qualification and experience will meet your requirements. Yours faithfully, John.
Dear Sir or Madam,

I am writing this letter with regard to your advertisement about the Spanish teacher who
is required
to teach you two children for a
year
. I am 40 years
old
Spanish working as a Spanish language teacher in a well-known private school in Madrid.
Therefore
, it will be my pleasure to apply for the occupation which you are looking for.

The foremost reason of applying for this job is that I have 10 years’ experience in Spanish teaching field. I have a vast history of educating young pupils from 8 to 15 years
old
.
Moreover
, I am bilingual, and I can speak English
fluently
as well
which will be easy to communicate with you and your children.

I would like to inform you that
in addition
to Spanish, I
am qualified
to give private lessons of Math
as well
. As I studied Engineering for 5 years which is allowing me to teach Math for younger age.

I was looking forward
to immigrate
to Australia since 1
year
.
However
, I am searching for a suitable job to
allow
me to settle in the country.
So
,
hopefully
my qualification and experience will
meet
your requirements.

Yours
faithfully
,

John.
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IELTS letter You have a seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter • Explain why you would be suitable for the job. • Say what else you could do for the family. • Give your reasons for waiting the job.

Letter
  American English
7 paragraphs
200 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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  • Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
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    Vary your linking phrases using synonyms
Lexical Resource: 6.0
  • Try to vary your vocabulary using accurate synonyms
  • Use less common question specific words that accurately convey meaning
  • Check your work for spelling and word formation mistakes
Grammatical Range: 6.5
  • Use a variety of complex and simple sentences
  • Check your writing for errors
Task Achievement: 6.5
  • Answer all parts of the question
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    Present relevant ideas
  • Fully explain these ideas
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    Support ideas with relevant, specific examples
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