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Teaching job in Australia

Teaching job in Australia Le9G

Dear mister and madam, I'm writing this letter to you because of the advertisement about you looking for someone to teach your kids portuguese, which is my mother language. I've been living in Australia for about two years now, which gives me the fluency i need to be able to communicate with no problems with your children, and it has not been a long time since i was speaking portuguese on a daily basis, so i still have full dominion of the idiom. Back in Brazil, i was a mathematics and physics school teacher, so i have a lot of experience teaching a room with around thirty children, so i think i would not have any problem while teaching both of your kids. And by the way, i could also be teaching them those two fields, if you feel like it would be good to the have some reinforcement study at it. I know both are disciplines that children often have difficulty in school, and many parents look for particular teacher to help they kids with them. So it might be a good solution for you to have me helping them with that too. I love been with children, and i love to teach, so i think this job would be ideal for me, even more now that the company i was working has closed their office here in the city, and i lost my job because of that. Therefore, i have the time and the will to teach kids, and i would love to work with you. Sincerely,

Dear mister and madam,

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